The story is about a long lost sister who ends up finding out she had a sister, but she wonders why throughout her whole life her little sister was never there. later on she finds out her little sister died at five months.... i need your help to add more details. thank you

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The story is about a long lost sister who ends up finding out she had a sister, but she wonders why throughout her whole life her little sister was never there. later on she finds out her little sister died at five months.... i need  your help to add more details. thank you

ray_masters · Answer

it seems pretty good but you should add the names and ages of the first sister and little sis. example: 
"This story is about a (age) girl named (name) who finds out that she has a sister but she wonders why throughout her life why hasn't her younger sister, (name), been there." 

Then later in the story she should find out that she died. 
"P.s you don't have to take my advise"

karrie631 · Answer

@Ray_Masters thanks and your right what was wrong with me for not being more specific. and honestly this story is about me, since i never met my little sister (april) i wanted to write a story about the both of us. im not even supposed to know about her until im eighteen, but yet i know everything about her. if its ok can you help me with the details??????