Question

WHAT ABOUT THIS? days are hard,
when you are forced to clean the yard,
why not run,
when he has a gun?
i will be full of glee,
when i am free.
life is a strife,
when you are fighting for life.
struggling with the bands,
tied tightly around your hands.
try to call for help,
but its not even a yelp.
here stuck in pain,
not to speak in vain.
is really sore,
he finds a bore.
because torcher me he may,
i wish i was at the bay,
this is a strife for life. HELP THE KIDS AND ANIMALS WHO ARE BEATEN AND TORCHERED!!

Answer 1

@Thadds2003 @errinss @Ray_Masters @escamer

Answer 2

what ya think

Answer 3

its amazing

Answer 4

thx

Answer 5

i wish i could write poems like that i used to but i lost my hope and passion for it

Answer 6

why

Answer 7

-mouth drops- wow... just wow omg i can't believe you're this good and sooooooooo much better then me XD

Answer 8

people just brought me down i lost it all

Answer 9

-pouts- i'm jealous

Answer 10

* cry's* its so..... heart touching.......

Answer 11

that sucks dont listen to what peeps say errinis if you belive you can do whats stopping you from not?

Answer 12

you have online supporters @errinss

Answer 13

aww you all are supper sweet @Ray_Masters @RAINBOWDASHROCKS

Answer 14

thx

Answer 15

wow, ok.

Answer 16

lol not sweet (for me) just awesome and supported

Answer 17

ok @Ray_Masters

Answer 18

lol

Answer 19

i'm more of a story writer than writing poems soo i'll like everything you post @RAINBOWDASHROCKS

Answer 20

mee toooo it is fantastic.

Answer 21

Cool, i would post a part of a story i'm working on but idk how lol

Answer 22

i am writing a story as well or at least trying to

Answer 23

ok thx i am writing about a dog

Answer 24

nice

Answer 25

i love dogs
this is my Klark

Answer 26

aww

Answer 27

when he waas younger at least

Answer 28

he's cute lol

Answer 29

i like him...... hes adorable.

Answer 30

what does he look like now?

Answer 31

if anyone wants to read my story i'm writing you can go to Qoutev.com and look up Ray Masters you can find it

Answer 32

dang, you have a lot.

Answer 33

this is shylough

Answer 34

thor

Answer 35

foxy

Answer 36

sugar

Answer 37

drizzt

Answer 38

dang u got a lot

Answer 39

shadowmoon

Answer 40

she hates pics

Answer 41

i like thor he's a German Shepard, right?

Answer 42

black sapphire

Answer 43

and squeaky

Answer 44

yes thor is

Answer 45

nice and that's A LOT of pets XD

Answer 46

are these al your animals?