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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Hey any critiques- the only poetry I can write is dark. I'm 13 so (not to bother) but please be descriptive in what you mean. A SINGLE THING Children buried in shallow graves Could never beat what hunted them Wives and mothers turned into slaves Fathers thrown in the lion's den The cold wind howls calling on their souls But they can't run their hearts run cold Blood drips as bodies swing And they can't do a single thing

OpenStudy (sapphire-ice):

Like it

OpenStudy (neonumbrella5115):

What inspired you to write this? This poem really makes you think. :D

OpenStudy (hope210):

I think its really good.

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