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hey! i wrote a short story and was wondering if you guys could leave some feedback! thanks!

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ok

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sure!

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yeah!

Answer 4

Oh the ending is shocking! I like it though! :D

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thanks!

Answer 6

ya its really good! ^-^ keep this up and it could be a book!

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Yeah!

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it's just a short story for school nothing major lol but thank you!!

Answer 9

You deserve a medal for that!

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kudos!

Answer 11

awww thanks qwertty!!

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You welcome! :D

Answer 13

Do you have it in a different format? I unfortunately cannot open Microsoft Office. :(

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i sure do!

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@simplymarie_x

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Yay okay! :) Let me read it! brb

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Awww, I loved it! It was so cute! I wish I could write short stories but I'm not really creative. I loved the ending.

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thanks @simplymarie_x it was hard but my mom said to base it off one of my pictures so i did!

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it was grate

Answer 20

thanks! nice pfp! river song is awesome!

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i now right np

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Doing GREAT I see! :D

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yoda

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@myah

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OMGGG

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WTFFFFF