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OpenStudy (errinss):

I'm in a dark place I don't know how to escape I can't even see the hand in front of me someone thought it would be a good idea to guide me out only to get lost themselves I'm in a dark place and i don't know how to escape

OpenStudy (errinss):

@BlazeRider2798 @blahblhblahblah6675 @DreamCaster @DanHowell @daisyduck04 @Wendy.Ivette11714 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @weezergeezer @itsbribro @Destinyrules1234

OpenStudy (daisyduck04):

whats the question

OpenStudy (errinss):

its a poem not a question

OpenStudy (errinss):

@daisyduck04

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This is very deep with such a dark meaning behind it. I love it, really makes you think!

OpenStudy (errinss):

thx @physicsstudies i was going for something meaningful and dark i guess lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

My favorite part is "someone thought it would be a good idea to guide me out only to get lost themselves" this is really wonderful. It touches a dark place that I can relate to. ✰✰✰✰✰

OpenStudy (leiasandoval98):

love the writing. it kinda could be used as a song.

OpenStudy (errinss):

@PrincessStyles-Horan

OpenStudy (princessstyles-horan):

@errinss I love it

OpenStudy (errinss):

awesome

OpenStudy (errinss):

@RAINBOWDASHROCKS

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

its great!

OpenStudy (errinss):

thx @RAINBOWDASHROCKS

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

np

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

hey do you know if Ray_Masters has been on

OpenStudy (errinss):

he was on the other day but i haven't seen him today not yet at least

OpenStudy (hope210):

Great poem

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

i looked at terra satilite view and there is a hurricane heading his way

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

@errinss ya there

OpenStudy (errinss):

yea im here wait there's gonna be a hurricane in Arizona?

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

he lives in florida

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

its heading his way

OpenStudy (errinss):

o

OpenStudy (errinss):

no

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

yup i need to let him know and i hope he evacuated

OpenStudy (errinss):

hopefully

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

ya i read nasa all the time so i know whats coming

OpenStudy (rainbowdashrocks):

its a cyclone

OpenStudy (errinss):

o no

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

i like it you did try to do your work before u asked us and i like it so i think you will get a:A so good luck and i like your picture it's very pretty but anyway i hope you get a good grade on this poem. and i will click the best response for u cause i have faith in you i know you will get a good grade. i give you five star too and the thumps up :D :D :D :D

OpenStudy (poochiehelp65):

good very good 10/10

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

@poochiehelp65 i need to talk to you in the writing chat

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I know this is absolutely random but I live in Florida too and when hurricanes come, you don't need to evacuate unless they're SUPER bad like a category 4 or 5 or whatever is seen as super bad. We get quite a few hurricanes so if we were to leave every time a hurricane was coming our way we would probably barely be in florida lol.

OpenStudy (errinss):

lol

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

you welcome @errinss

OpenStudy (briannaontimeforreal):

what do you want to talk about in the writting chat pod

OpenStudy (errinss):

any good request for another poem idea? |dw:1452819020004:dw|

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