Question

will sombody please revise my story and help me add vivid details and mre dialoge between the charaters please this is my rough draft
"If your going to become king i suggest you act as proper as you can and look your best everyone in the town is going to be at this dinner and you must earn their trust" Lady Macbeth damands as the couple are on their way to dinner. Shortly after they arrive, everyone is seated and talking enjoying dinner when suddenley a gust of wind hits the room and all the candles go out forcing the waiters to scramble to re light the dark room, everyone is reliefed when

Answer 1

they light the room back up except Macbeth who Leaps from his seat and storms into the next room, His wife follows him furious as to why he just left her alone, where she finds him sitting in a chair pale as ever, He explains that he seen banquos ghost floating above on the staircase overlooking the room, and hes terifed banquo has