Question

can someone help me with English!!

Answer 1

What is the question?

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so basically I have to chose a greatest team and then I have to explain what makes this team greater than others

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http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/569711fae4b01480c27faa5f-mtalhahassan2-1452741159066-20160113_220725.jpg

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Do you have a team to write about?

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Cricket is one of my favorite sport forever, but the team Pakistan (2009) was one of my favorite team.

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Which one do you know more about?

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Cricket is one of my favorite sport forever, but the team Pakistan (2009) was one of my favorite team. I started watching and playing cricket at the age of 10, at that time there is T20 world cup going on and all of my cousin including myself we all are supporting team Pakistan. The Pakistan team was very well balanced with a lot of experience and young players. The captain of the team Younus Khan was well organized with some plans and also self-confident that inshallah they will win the upcoming world cup for Pakistan. They team was unity, peace and working hard as a team for the world cup.

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I also have to used some to concept from this link:
http://onstudynotes.com/notes/boh4m-grade-12-business-leadership-teams-and-teamwork/

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Okay, to support your choice you need to put down examples on why this is a great team. In other words what made you think that team was the greatest?

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What made you say I'm going to support this team and root for them in the World cup.

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first of all, I am supporting this team because its my own country team and also I am very big fan of the team captain.

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in 2009, the team also won the world cup

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So we got down that part pretty much, now what are some characteristics of your team?

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The characteristics of the team be like they always listean to their captain and also give him respect

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You start off by writing the teams name then why they are better than the other teams(cricket teams) then you say what you like about the as you have mentioned they won the world cup in 2009. Next you say what is unique about that team. You can also mention which player you like the most if you like. What made you start supporting that team. You could also say from what age (you said you started supporting the from the age of 10).

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Im not sure if thats going to help you that much ,but if it did great :)

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So based off the info you gave me you could start your paper kinda like this

I picked the team Pakistan as the greatest team ever( don't forget to put what sport the team is from like I did) because ( here you could put the reason why you like them,) then you could put some of their achievements down followed by their characteristics. Then you could go on to explain the team member you like the best but don't leave out the other players make sure you talk about them too.

You can also go off of what @zaynab123 said he has a good way too

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@Hope210 im a she actually lol

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oops sorry, thats the sucky thing about user names they can confuse you sometimes

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yeah i know lol

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Here I'll fan you to make up for it :)

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oh ok :)

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Well I'm getting off here see you later. and @MTALHAHASSAN2 if you ever need help just tag or message me.

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see you later

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Pakistan cricket 2009 Pakistan is my favorite cricket team because in 2009 Pakistan won the T20 World Cup. The man of the tournament was Dilshan, but the man of the match of the final was Shahid Afridi. Shahid Afridi is my favorite player. The captain of the team was Younus Khan, the best player of Pakistan side.

Pakistan vs Srilanka Final. Pakistan won by 8 wickets (10 balls remaning). Afridi made Pakistan won the T20 World Cup, Afridi made 53 runs in the final. Stand up for the Champion T20 World cup 1992 World Cup In 1992 Pakistan won the World Cup. The man of the match was Miandad.

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yeah that's really good

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instead of writing "Afridi made Pakistan won the T20 World Cup" write Afridi made Pakistan win

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@Majesty69 @magicremix123

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dude, sorry.I didnt mean to make fun of cricket. I just didnt know anything about it

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@ilovehorses14

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The Greatest Team Ever
Pakistan Cricket Team (2009)
Cricket has been one of my favorite sports since I was a young boy. It is a bat-and-ball game played between two teams of 11 players each on a field at the center of which is a rectangular 22-yard-long pitch. The game is played by 120 million players in many countries, making it the world's second most popular sport. Cricket takes a lot of dedication, practice, and teamwork, but what I think makes the greatest team ever.
Pakistan cricket 2009 is my favorite cricket team because in 2009 Pakistan won the T20 World Cup. At that time, the team was very well balanced with a lot of experience and young players. The captain of the team Younus Khan was well organized with some plans and also pretty self-confident. All the team players were unity, peace and worked hard as a team.
The man of the tournament was Dilshan, but the man of the match of the final was Shahid Afridi and he is one of my favorite player in Pakistan team. The captain of the team Younus Khan, the best player of Pakistan side. Pakistan vs Sri-lanka Final. Pakistan won by 8 wickets (10 balls remaining). Afridi made Pakistan win the T20 World Cup, Afridi made 53 runs in the final.

Para 3 *Any problems during T20 World Cup Example: Player injuries, other team scores? Weather conditions favorable or not?*
Before starting of the World Cup the team lose one of the greater bowler Shoaib Akther because of the hamstring and the fans seems unhappy with it.
Para 4 Their Victory? or their Loss? Talk about how the fans felt and how they team felt, and how they showed their sportsmanship with other teams
During the World cup, there are so many issues occur in the team such as like the team lose first of their two matches and then all the media start criticizing all the players and the coaches stuff. But the team handle media pressure very well and win other of the matches then finally qualify for the semi-final and beat South Africa in the semi- final and won the game by 7 runs.

Para 5 Conclusion (Summary of entire essay) and answer of Thesis question

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@itsbribro

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@Whitemonsterbunny17 @ilovehorses14 @whpalmer4 @AloneS @Learner11

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@StrawberryKiwi

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PPoNjMKrx8EarFq1xgtp2mCX75DhBVTR_-CB5tPOj7Q/edit#

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can you please look at my grammar and spelling

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@TheEdwardsFamily @triciaal

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Cricket, lovely cricket
And he bowls and it's a 6

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excellent work
some suggestions to revise
-long pitch. The game is add the objective of the game how it is played, scored etc
but what I think makes the greatest team ever. and these qualities are definitely evident (exceptionally high level) in the greatest team. I think that award goes to Pakistan.

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but Is I am doing it right?

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team because in team. In .......world cup!
a lot of experience and young players. both experienced and inexperienced or seasoned and new or young and mature

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You did an excellent job! I am just suggesting how to edit to make it flow
look at the first section of my response and find it on your paper then edit it with my suggestion

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wait but they also want me to apply some course concept

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should put the part about the excitement, the commentators etc in the first paragraph more about the game

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http://onstudynotes.com/notes/boh4m-grade-12-business-leadership-teams-and-teamwork/

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there are some course concept

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with some plans and also pretty self-confident ,very detail-oriented and self-confifent

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@triciaal do you even look at my work:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PPoNjMKrx8EarFq1xgtp2mCX75DhBVTR_-CB5tPOj7Q/edit#

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were unity, peace and worked hard as a team.

what kind of a question is that? did you read my response

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i am taking about the grammar stuff

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what do you think i have been doing for the last 30 minutes?

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@triciaal lol oh sorry

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do you understand my responses?

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yesh what you mean by the long pitch

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the separation between your section and my suggestion to modify

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can you please open that document and tell me where do i need changes

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sorry but i am little confuse

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you need to look at my response the first section is what you have in yours and the rest of it is how to edit it

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i am doing the same thing but its little confuse

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@triciaal anyway i will try my best

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yours
were unity, peace and worked hard as a team. and then mine
united, worked harmoniously and

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ok i will change that

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now start at the beginning of my responses and you will see how hard I have been working on YOUR paper

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@triciaal ok but how can i make connect with the course concept

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@triciaal
http://onstudynotes.com/notes/boh4m-grade-12-business-leadership-teams-and-teamwork/

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team Younus Khan, the best player of Pakistan side. he is the captain of the team it is redundant to say on the Pakistan side and put a comma between team and Younus

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oh 22-yard -long pitch the section of your paper for reference

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@triciaal why don't you come on my document and then over their we can make a correct

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@triciaal it will take like 20 mins

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because I just spend almost an hour on your paper and you are not reading my responses

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I helped all I could. Like I said, just go back and look at where you've already spoken about the concepts behind teamwork and synergy and include the vocabulary. Good luck!!