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OpenStudy (mathisfun13):

a better way to rephrase or re word the sentence below I will therefore focus on treating people with mental disorders who not only seek treatment but also been neglected.

OpenStudy (bigdreams):

I honestly have no idea. but, i came up with: i will focus on treating neglected people with mental disorders who seek treatment.

OpenStudy (bigdreams):

that doesn't make any sense to me tho :T

OpenStudy (misssmartiez):

Ok, I suppose I can help.

OpenStudy (misssmartiez):

Can you add additional words or use only the ones given to you?

OpenStudy (misssmartiez):

Rephrasement with additional letters: I will focus on treating people with mental disorders and also those who suffer from neglection. Therefore I intend on giving treatment to patients who are suffering any kinds of disease or disorder. Rephrasement without additional letters: Therefore, I will focus on treating people with mental disorders. Not only who seeks treatment, but also who has been neglected. Otherwise, yours would do just fine, it is correct with nice wording. Good job.

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