Question

there's a grey cloud over me
and i'm walking straight forward
while everyone is skipping in sunlight
they got the sun rays shinning down on them

would this sound like a good intro to a song that i'm trying to write? tell me plz. thx.

Answer 1

I think it would be good

Answer 2

Oooh, so sad, dear. I really like it. I find it very relatable. I'd love to help you finish the song. It's beautiful so far :)

Answer 3

thx La0827.