who is in 9th grade flvs English 1
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Copy your fable and paste it in the space provided. Follow the steps below to improve the story. Original Fable: 1. Using what you now know about the authors’ tools, rate these aspects of the original fable on a scale of 1 to 5. Rate the Fable Used Frequently >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> Not Used Varied sentence structure 5 4 3 2 1 Vivid Imagery 5 4 3 2 1 Word Choice 5 4 3 2 1 2. How can you improve the fable? In addition to sentence structure, choose one of these Author's Tool Box tools that will help you add detail and interest to the story: Sentence Structure—vary the type and combination of sentences to create interest AND Check the other tool you will use to improve the fable ___Word Choice—add vocabulary that shapes the characters, sets the mood, and expresses a clear tone—consider using some of your rescued vocabulary words into your revised fable. ___ Imagery—use details that touch on the senses, making the story come alive for the reader 3. Now, rewrite the fable incorporating the two tools your selected. When you are finished, highlight the changes you made. Highlight sentence structure revisions in yellow, word choice revisions in green, and imagery revisions in blue. Improved Fable: In a short paragraph of at least three sentences, explain how the changes you’ve made improved your story:
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omg can you help me please
i already finished that but i need help with other things
i have 9 English assignments i have to finish today
dont worry i will not ask you to help me with all of them
@english23421
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@english23421
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