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Hey everyone! So here's my final draft of that short story I've been working on! hope you enjoy it! let me know if there are any ways for me to improve it! thanks!

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@-SpencerBraz- @tootzrll @Wendy.Ivette11714 @Fedorable

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@AloneS @dan815

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@Safa102

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THATS AN AMAZING STORY!!!! UR REALLY GOOD AT WRITING!!!

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WHAT SHE SAID!!!! GURL U GOT TALENT!! ^^^^

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u need a whole bucket load of medals for this...

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OOPS. just pretend i said "what he said"

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lol, great story

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thanks!!!! you guys really made my day!!! this took me 2 weeks so knowing you guys enjoyed it made me very happy!! X3

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@Qwertty123

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YEAH girl! You got a lot of Talent!

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thanks!

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:D

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@Pinkybottom67 @pooja195

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Wow! Thats really well written. Nice job! keep up the good work! :3

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That cliff hanger tho...Wooooooo

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thanks! i love a good cliff hanger myself lol

Answer 18

Omfg I see the title and I am already ticked....

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What the heck..he meets her and is already in love? So this is like oh first glance and I am in loove with you let's get married, make love, and have babies because you are like the most beautiful woman I've ever seen.

Answer 20

I could already tell Nina was the princess, may I suggest that as you mature over the years....kill your readers with anxiety.



Good pl0x though

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awesome story you should totally be a book writer after collage .

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@Anaise don't take this as sarcastic but thanks for the harsh criticism! It really means a lot! as for the title, it was the only thing i could think of right then! if you can think of something better please tell me!