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Can someone help fix my grammar?

Researchers from New England Anti- Vivisection state, “Every year in the U.S., over 25 million animals are used in biomedical experimentation. The majority of animals in labs (over 90 percent) are rats, mice, and birds”. New medicine is being discovered, through the use of animals. The question asked is, should animals be tested for new medical treatments?. Animal testing should be considered because; animals are similar to humans and have many of the same problems humans have as well. This makes it easier to find treatments that will cure many issues human

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@jayjaysimmer

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I know

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First check the caps, punctuation, and quotation etc.

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I thought everything was right ,but I missed two points. So maybe 1 things is wrong

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I'm making revisions so I have to find where I messed up at, otherwise I wouldn't care about those 2 points.

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?. is wrong a ? is punctuation

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I see ,you think that's it ?

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And the period goes inside the ""

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And the period at the end of the paragraph

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this is the whole paragraph
Researchers from New England Anti- Vivisection state, “Every year in the U.S., over 25 million animals are used in biomedical experimentation. The majority of animals in labs (over 90 percent) are rats, mice, and birds”. New medicine is being discovered, through the use of animals. The question asked is, should animals be tested for new medical treatments?. Animal testing should be considered because; animals are similar to humans and have many of the same problems humans have as well. This makes it easier to find treatments that will cure many issues humans have more effectively and quicker. Animals contribute to many different treatments there are in the world, this is why animal testing is necessary.

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Researchers from New England Anti- Vivisection state, “Every year in the U.S., over 25 million animals are used in biomedical experimentation. The majority of animals in labs (over 90 percent) are rats, mice, and birds." New medicine is being discovered, through the use of animals. The question asked is, should animals be tested for new medical treatments? Animal testing should be considered because; animals are similar to humans and have many of the same problems humans have as well. This makes it easier to find treatments that will cure many issues humans have more effectively and quicker. Animals contribute to many different treatments there are in the world, this is why animal testing is necessary.


this is the fixed 1

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Yes

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no period beside the question mark (The question asked is, should animals be tested for new medical treatments?.)

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I fixed it

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Ethan, that is incorrect

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@pooja195

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is that it?