Question

I am writing a book on wattpad and I want to know what you think of the first chapter! (Also, I make really cool wattpad covers if you need one).

Answer 1

Note: This chapter is VERY cheesy and cliché.

It was around 1:00 A.M., on April 23rd. I Lifted my right foot up on to the small, gray, night stand to tie my black Converse. I then grabbed my black backpack with all of the things I would need for my trip. As I climbed out my window, I scratched my left arm leaving about a two inch bloodstain on my white T-shirt. Dang. I have already ran into a problem and I haven't even left the house yet. I threw on my black leather jacket to cover up the stain.

Finally, I was off. Driving down the empty streets of Orlando. Once I got close to the Disney World entrance, I parked my Shiny silver Chevy on the side of the road. I walked the rest of the few miles. It didn't take very long- Okay fine it took around 2 hrs. By the time I snuck past the gates of Magic Kingdom it was 2:34am. The park opened at 8:00 A.M. That means that I have about 5 1/2 hours to explore and do whatever the heck I want to! I silently made my way down Main Street. I have taken this route many times, but never at 3 in the morning and definitely not all by myself. It was really strange being there with no screaming kids running around, But at the same time It was pretty cool.

Around 3 I started to get hot with the humid weather. I grabbed a pink hair tie from out of the front pocket of my backpack. I gathered my oily, straight, blondish-red hair and threw it up into a messy bun. I then went into the bathroom to change from my bloodstained white T-shirt into a black shirt so that i could take of my jacket. I was planning to stay until closing time that night, so I had packed extra clothes. When I finished in the bathroom, I finished walking down main street until I reached Cinderella's Castle. I stood looking at it for a few minutes. As I started walking around the right side of it, there was a radio voice coming from behind me. I couldn't make out what it was saying because directly after, I heard a Deep voice say "10-4". I knew this was security. I ran the rest of the way around the castle until I found the next road and then kept on running. Somehow I found myself to be in Tomorrow-land. I ran into the bathroom across from the people mover to catch my breath. On my way to fantasy land, I heard a new voice coming from the opposite direction.

Answer 2

Oh! THe title of the book is 'I Fell In Love At The Happiest Place On Earth'

Answer 3

Here is the link to my book. Please read the second chapter if you enjoyed.

Answer 4

https://www.wattpad.com/203472246-i-fell-in-love-at-the-happiest-place-on-earth-how