Question

Can I someone review my answers?
(I'll post more in the comments)
Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"Are you certain there are no more pickles left?" Mr. Jenkins asked. "Yes, I ate the last one myself," said Ms. Evans, who looked sheepish. "It's no problem, but I wish there was a store nearby." "I'm afraid not," Ms. Evans said. "The nearest one is twenty miles away."

a. Incorrectly-my answer
b. Correctly