Question

A new song I wrote. Opinions & Feedback Appreciated. I spent the day writing it so it's not as good as my other ones lol. But here ya go:

Answer 1

There we are sitting there so very far apart.......
I saw you and you saw me
connecting it felt like ecstasy...
tick tock the time goes back to the day we met
not like it was supposed to happen but it did
where was you all this time...
when did falling for someone come without a climb
no words to say, no feelings to feel you took my breath away

Feelings are what you make em
Words are how you say em
Feelings rapidly increasing and the words are none
thinking maybe you could be the one
the one I hold onto always
the one I make sure is happy forever

you're so beautiful a heart of pure gold make the stars stop shining
you're the spotlight and you flame with perfection
thinking where we are and how the hell this came to be
out of nowhere it struck me as fast as one, two, three
i have no idea where im going with this cant you see
if happiness is what you're looking for it's something I can guarentee


Feelings are what you make em
Words are how you say em
Feelings rapidly increasing and the words are none
thinking maybe you could be the one
the one I hold onto always
the one I make sure is happy forever

I can be there forever and you can be there always......
Wherever the stars may take you I hope you are happy
You are caring and loving using amazing as a word to describe you is sappy
An understatement is all it is the word we use is perfection and i dont know if you see
A delicate heart like a master you have the key
something that would be, is something that could be
grab my hand lets sail away to a place we can be free

the one I hold onto always
the one I make sure is happy forever
the one I hold onto always
the one I make sure is happy forever

Answer 2

Good good o_o medal plssssss

Answer 3

It is nice! :)

Answer 4

Love it!

Answer 5

its amazing but the feeling and meaning changes completely 3 times during the song, also a bridge after your second chorus would work