Question

Here is a song i am starting to write right now. feedback please...

Answer 1

Girls Night Out!

(Leader)Riding in my big truck,
Dirt on the tires
Friends in the back seat,
We’re running like fire
The wines in the cooler
The stakes on the grill
We’re gonna have a fun time
Get ready for a thrill

We’re gonna get them girls and party all night long
we’re gonna get some boys and showed them how it’s done
out in the country this is how we do it.
me and my girls we dance down to the music
on the girls night out

lookin good in my tight jeans
got the music up loud
got eyes lookin at me

Answer 2

not done with 2nd verse yet

Answer 3

@myah @puppylove<3123 @puppylover0617 @puppylover52 @americansniper12 @dakid88 @kittymeow101 @paki @Qwertty123 @uri @Vickyisthesmartone123 @Vampirelove28

Answer 4

Wow nice! lol

Answer 5

thanks i havent finnished it yet

Answer 6

lol

Answer 7

Good job and good luck on this! @teresar7

Answer 8

@Frozen15

Answer 9

@teresar7 this is just perfect and very awesome for when having a girls night out!

Answer 10

thanks guys so very much

Answer 11

that's a great song :)

Answer 12

is this country??????

Answer 13

Very good!
It makes sense, (which is important)
I like it, it's awesome! :)

Answer 14

thanks lol it really makes my day when i get on here and i see that you guys likes my lyrics/songs. yes this is country. (my first country song) hmm. i write pop, rock, rap, and country

Answer 15

AWESOME! :D

Answer 16

I write rock , pop , drama I think its called and many more

Answer 17

well, i am always looking forward to new music. MUSIC IS LIFE!

Answer 18

@teresar7 I love the song

Answer 19

THANKS lol anymore suggestions on a new song or to continue this one?

Answer 20

you should write more songs

Answer 21

i always write more and more songs lol its my life

Answer 22

lol good cause your really good at it

Answer 23

thanks i get told that alot

Answer 24

np

Answer 25

:)

Answer 26

First, I'd like to say good effort on writing this and posting it but I'll be the first to say this isn't my favorite. The lyrics are very basic. I suppose it's fine if that's the sound your going for, but personally I think it lacks complexity.

However, it's really difficult to judge a song by it's lyrics. Do you have any music written yet?

Answer 27

i am curently working on adding drums to it and soon, the guitar

Answer 28

jezzus ppl, songs dont have to rhyme, they have to have meaning. i hope im not being rude but if you rhyme the versus like a four year old, the song will sound as if it were written by a four year old.

Answer 29

I don't understand who you're directing your opinion at, but rhyming was definitely not being discussed previously.

Answer 30

i was speaking to @teresar7 its the fact that people rhyme their versus instead if meaning them

Answer 31

I wanna see you write a rock song :) @teresar7

Answer 32

look up .. rock n roll by avirl lavigne awesome song and funny vid

Answer 33

every word written in all my songs comes from my heart. i ryme them because it sounds better to me and its just something i do. but every word is a word from me. The song is me.

Answer 34

well its very good!

Answer 35

thank you

Answer 36

i rewrote it. here is how i did it...

Girls Night Out!

(Leader)Riding in my big truck,
Dirt on the tires
Friends in the back seat,
We’re running like fire
The wines in the cooler
The stakes on the grill
We’re gonna have a fun time
Get ready for a thrill

lookin good in my tight jeans
got the music up loud
got boys lookin at me
everytime i smile
yeah we're gonna have a girls night
and it’s gonna be a blast
raise your hands if you're with me
we’re gonna clash

We’re gonna get them girls and party all night long
we’re gonna get some boys and showed them how it’s done
out in the country this is how we do it.
me and my girls we dance down to the music
on the girls night out

Answer 37

Great song hun! I'd love to hear it if you record it ^.^

Answer 38

yeah its really good!! I'm singing it and already made up my own tune HAHA , i wanna hear the original tune!!

Answer 39

it sounds good. keep it up.

Answer 40

thanks. im using sound cloud to make the music part.

Answer 41

lol, it sounds good.

Answer 42

i love it !

Answer 43

DUDE your Jealous now eat ice

Answer 44

@Jonrooks your comment is in poor taste and includes no relevance. If you're going to post something in a negative light, at least include something constructive.

Answer 45

like whhaat add in eat ice for your burns

Answer 46

No, like, if it's not useful and pertinent to the topic, don't say it.

Answer 47

ok then next ill eat ice

Answer 48

tell that to janrooks he literaly affended a songwriter you what that could do IT COULD CHANGE SOMEONES LIFE to the worst so we should ecourage instead OK

Answer 49

SELA

Answer 50

jon please just go away. i post my songs on here so i can get feedbacks not insulted.

Answer 51

@Jonrooks you're the worst. The literal worst. Go do something useful with your life.

Answer 52

its fine. im use to it

Answer 53

he does that every time i post a song. thats y i stopped.

Answer 54

HAHA
I'M A HUGE FAN OF THE WEEKND!
WOO!

Answer 55

That doesn't make it ok. I'm all for honest critiquing but this is just bullying. I don't know why this guy gets off on destroying self esteem. He is a fool.

Answer 56

CYBER BULLYING! O_O

Answer 57

he got blocked from this site like so many times but he gets back on. should i take the post down or what?

Answer 58

i dont want to start a fight

Answer 59

No, don't he is just going to get in trouble, not you

Answer 60

Tell a moderator,

Answer 61

OR an ambassador! O_O

Answer 62

SOME OF US DON'T HAVE A LIFE AND FLY TO WHAT'S RIGHT BY!
-Vickyisthesmartone123

Answer 63

Yeah, tell somebody. This is not okay. He is everything that's wrong with the internet. He needs to get the freak out of here.

Answer 64

WHO?! O_O

Answer 65

jonrooks

Answer 66

OH!
I thought it was you tanner...XD

Answer 67

no

Answer 68

whats that

Answer 69

Peeranswer is pretty much a knock-off of Openstudy, only you're aloud to discuss randomly about it.

Answer 70

oh

Answer 71

its blocked on my chrome book

Answer 72

ok

Answer 73

shhh your Jealous cause your worst and atleast she can sing

Answer 74

and write songs

Answer 75

ha! shows what you know!

Answer 76

no sense

Answer 77

I've Had enough of the insults from you. Why don't you just leave me alone? I don't come on here for insults. I get enough from you everyday!

Answer 78

who me

Answer 79

im defending you

Answer 80

hello

Answer 81

not u sorry. i was talking about jon

Answer 82

oh

Answer 83

do you like bikes

Answer 84

yes

Answer 85

met too i have a one speed bike i might change it to a fixie

Answer 86

nice

Answer 87

do you have a bike

Answer 88

not anymore...

Answer 89

oh what happened to it

Answer 90

my ex (aka jon) sold it

Answer 91

why and y is he your ex

Answer 92

cause he abused me

Answer 93

ouch your ok now

Answer 94

yeah i juess

Answer 95

good

Answer 96

do you play any instruments