Question

How's this lyric (only part 1 for now)

"I told myself when I was by myself , that this world is getting overwhelmed and I know , I know
Cause she said , everybody judges too much , making the difference feel falling down and they don't know that whats coming to them , coming to them , oh oh "
If this is good . please tell me if I should make a part 2? Please don't make mean/stupid remarks , I try my best

Answer 1

I know its not the best , but I need input of what I should change or do , let me know what you think of it :)

Answer 2

Oh that is great! Nice job!

Answer 3

i love it

Answer 4

thanks! want me to make a part 2?

Answer 5

nice job

Answer 6

Yeah you should do part 2!

Answer 7

ok give me 5

Answer 8

Part 1 (Added another line)

"i told my self when I was by myself , that this world is getting overwhelmed , and I know , I know
"cause she said , everybody judges too much , making the difference feel falling down and they don't know whats coming to them , coming to them , oh , oh
"But they don't know what, she knows , he knows , and I know ...mmmmm yeah

Part 2 (hope yall like it?!)

"I was walking down the street when I saw you , you were crying to your friend "don't let me go" why let go?!
Cause the world is just a living starship ready to take off when it ready to let go , but why is it letting go , oh no , oh mm yeah , they don't know , they don't know , that this is , is what it feels.... like

-How is it?
- Let me know if there should be any changes :)
ENJOY!

Answer 9

@cmtboy2 @Qwertty123

Answer 10

not bad

Answer 11

thank you , is there any changes I need to fix @cmtboy2 @Qwertty123 ?? @adamgrimm

Answer 12

no it all looks fine

Answer 13

no i like it how it is

Answer 14

thanks :)

Answer 15

part 3 anyone ?

Answer 16

Nice. I can't write songs, or books in that matter, so good job x3

Answer 17

Like it! :D

Answer 18

thanks , if u want a part 3 , ill come later to post then :)

Answer 19

Sure! :D

Answer 20

thanks for the medal @ash_heather1

Answer 21

@Frozen15 np :D

Answer 22

just curious , do you know who this is on my pic? (shes a rock star)

Answer 23

is it Avril Lavigne?

Answer 24

yeah :) I love her songs

Answer 25

cool, i'm more into one direction XD

Answer 26

oh ok , sorry but I'm not rlly a fan of them but I like a few of there songs "drag me down" I'm more of a rock girl XD

Answer 27

no its fine...but i like all of their songs like i can list more than 10 of their songs off the top of my head
little things
drag me down
perfect
steal my girl
drag me down
kiss me
one thing
best song ever
story of my life
you & i
live while were young
im a die hard fan that's 11 but those are my favs <3

Answer 28

nice!

Answer 29

yea :P

Answer 30

@Ray_Masters

Answer 31

i just did a song for this girl , want me to tag you in it? you might like it?!

Answer 32

are u talking to meh? XD

Answer 33

Very good, i'm wondering how you come up with good songs like that lol

Answer 34

yes @ash_heather1
and ikr @Ray_Masters
i wrote those 2 songs you saw and that was written less than 5 mins

i suddenly just got good at writing songs , i love music :)

Answer 35

Nice! This song is very good!

Answer 36

thank you @TaiofChi i have 2 other songs ive wrote i can tag you if you
like me too

Answer 37

I Just became a fan ;3

Answer 38

ill tag all of you in the other 2 :)

Answer 39

Nice @Frozen15

Answer 40

yea tag me :D

Answer 41

hey @Qwertty123

Answer 42

Hi

Answer 43

thanks for the 5 medals everyone I really appreciate it!! ill get a part3 either later or tomorrow morning , I'm really starting to love this site , at first I thought most of yall were rude (not you but others when I started) cause the way they were treating me but I can always say .. in a place , there is rude and bad people but in that place is still good people but they are just hidden ... you ppl are really nice tho
-Izabella < my real name :)

Answer 44

its AAAWWWWWWESSOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEE

Answer 45

haha thanks , glad you liked it and dang I don't think I had wrote a part 3 yet , gonna have that out shortly hopefully , cause I have been really busy with my family and school , you know , normal life errands