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Preamble to the U.S. Constitution
"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."
This is how I would rewrite this Preamble so that other people can understand it.

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***WILL MEDAL***

Preamble to the U.S. Constitution
"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."
This is how I would rewrite this Preamble so that other people can understand it.

iluvsoccer · Answer

May I ask what your question is?

anonymous · Answer

This is how I would rewrite this Preamble so that other people can understand it.
^^^ That is the question

wwhitlock · Answer

Your rewrite is nearly the same as the original. You might want to break it down a bit more.
What does domestic tranquility mean, for instance.