Question

Love can bring sorrow
Love can bring joy
Love can bring anguish
Love can bring relief
Love can bring insecurity
Love can bring security
But all love has brought me is salty tears and depression....
I guess love is a leap you are willing to take.
For the brave, or even the foolish.
That is a leap I'm not sure I'm strong enough to take again.....I'm broken.

Answer 1

Yay! Its good

Answer 2

Thanks!

Answer 3

Dancer was here

Answer 4

As were many others.....

Answer 5

so this is a poem? it's good

Answer 6

Yeah I think so lol....it was just something I needed to get out, that's what writers do I guess. The words were itching at my fingers, so I just had to let the words out, it hits home ya know? I have had a lot of sadness in my life, I think when you have a life of sadness and experience with deep feelings in life, it hightens your writing skills.

Answer 7

@Englishguy @escamer

Answer 8

Yeah I get the feeling. I actually write fanfic (which is a dumb comparison when you're talking about poetry) but sometimes if I'm upset then maybe I'll have the character go through something that I went through. You know?

Answer 9

Yeah, I understand completely...putting your emotions into your characters is a exceptional way to write! Do you write on wattpad?

Answer 10

No I don't lol but I screenshot something (not really a deep part of it but it's something I wrote)

Answer 11

From what I read, it's a pretty darn good job!

Answer 12

Aww thanks! That means a lot

Answer 13

Of course!

Answer 14

I have another one if you want.....
(I don't remember but I think those ones make a whole chapter IDK)
It's a different story lol

Answer 15

no wait actually the first four were one chapter and the other two were from another lol

Answer 16

OML THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL ;~; @Carpe_Diem77

Answer 17

thanks @escamer

Answer 18

anytime! :D

Answer 19

@bigpapa1 sorry for the late response, but you're writings are amazing!

Answer 20

@Carpe_Diem77 thank you so much!

Answer 21

you are SO welcom! ^_^

Answer 22

e* lol

Answer 23

Yeah some people think it's too dark but that's just how I roll

Answer 24

same!

Answer 25

yeah you know sometimes I just wanna be different from all the people writing vampire stories you know?