Question

Here's a poem I'd like to make into a song sometime. I'll probably edit some of the words to make it easier to make a rhythm for.

Answer 1

Lost Soul
Darkness surrounds in its eternal depth
Nothing else remains.
The fireflies that lit the night have now lost light
And again I stay here hidden waiting for the day.

This lost soul,
This lost soul
Can’t find a way back home.

The lies have covered the path.
This soul can’t face its wrath.

No matter how far it goes, it always knows
that there may be no light.
That allusion will take place
and lead it to a deeper darker plight

This lost soul,
This lost soul
Its body has degraded.
The only thing left is darkness.


The only thing left is bones.



@adamgrimm

Answer 2

WOW nice! :)

Answer 3

That's really good :D

Answer 4

cool :)

Answer 5

@Qwertty123 @bigpapa1 @ayeedomo aww this makes me feel better.

Answer 6

I like "The fireflies that lit the night have now lost light" :D

Answer 7

@ayeedomo thanks!

Answer 8

yeah same I like that one too

Answer 9

I'd love to make this into a rock song. Something slowish would fit it.

Answer 10

I love rock music... it's like my favorite genre

Answer 11

same. I used to not hear music until like a year ago. I got hooked on ONEOKROCK because I watched tons of anime I slowly introduced myself into rock with the help of friends. THANK GOD.

Answer 12

Yeah I used to be really into pop music.... Not anymore though lol

Answer 13

Same. I listened to it but I wasn't crazy about it.

Answer 14

What rock or pop?

Answer 15

POP.

Answer 16

I'm like yeshh rock now lets make a mosh pit!

Answer 17

I don't really like pop anymore. Alternative is probably the closest I'll get to pop lol
Yeah mosh pit XD

Answer 18

Same. SWS is the closest I get to pop lol.

Answer 19

Yeah same....
I'm seeing fall out boy in a few months lol

Answer 20

You welcome! I really like it!

Answer 21

That's cool. I don't listen to them much though but I mean concerts are rad. I went to Warped on July 14. It was amazing. It started raining during Pierce the Veil and Black Veil Brides were amazing. I cried during BVB. PTV PLAYED THE DIVINE ZERO! I cried too huehue

Answer 22

Yeah Fall Out Boy is my favorite band but I also enjoy stuff like Get Scared, Sleeping With Sirens, Falling in Reverse, MCR and all that stuff. I like BVB too.
It's only gonna be my second time going to a concert and my first time going to one in this genre

Answer 23

Just looked up Get Scared lol. For some reason the beginning of Badly Broken reminded me of All Time Low haha.

Answer 24

Wait you've never listened to Get Scared before?

Answer 25

That song sounds softer than their look but it's good :D

Answer 26

They have waaaay heavier songs than Badly Broken lol. Look up their song "The Strangest Stranger" (which is my favorite by them)

Answer 27

Nope. I know tons of bands but sometimes I come across some I've never listened to. Just about maybe 5 months ago my cousin introduced me to For Today and I was like okay how do I not know this band?

Answer 28

I've never heard of For Today lol

Answer 29

There. we are even

Answer 30

Listen to Break the Cycle by For Today. That's my first song from them. It's sick.

Answer 31

lol "we are even"
I will right now and I'll tell you what I think

Answer 32

Ooh I like this! (I'm listening right now)

Answer 33

Cool! He starts screaming at 1:37. if you are looking at the music video

Answer 34

Nope I was at a lyric video and he screamed at the beginning too I think (I don't know his voice so IDK if he's screaming or singing) but yeah... I like it :)

Answer 35

He screams at the beginning? Then its and edit. But yesh. Its a nice message. I deathgrowl to this and Not The American Average GET ON YOUR KNEES and my friends say I'm good. I growled at warped and people turned around astonished. I'm a 16 year old girl btw so yeh :D Thats why I kinda want to make rock songs.

Answer 36

Dude, do you have a Twitter? You seem pretty chill and relatable lol.

Answer 37

Nope I don't have social media

Answer 38

And I'm a girl lol

Answer 39

awh.

Answer 40

Sorta guessed that since FOB probably has a girl based fanbase. Not being stereotypical or sexist but it's something I've noticed at school.

Answer 41

Its been nice talking to you :D Idk if I should close this or wait for more ppl to comment.

Answer 42

lol You weren't being sexist or anything. It's fine

Answer 43

Yeah it's been nice talking to you too :) IDK what you should do really

Answer 44

I'll wait and close tomorrow. And I'll fan you back ^^

Answer 45

Okay. Thanks!

Answer 46

I gotta go but I'll probably be back later

Answer 47

alright :)

Answer 48

@Agl202 aw tanks~

Answer 49

Anytime ^_^

Answer 50

nice nice

Answer 51

@adamgrimm thanks

Answer 52

It could probably pass for something like SayWeCanFly now that I think of it....

Answer 53

nice