Question

What do ya'll think about my video?
Criticism would be much appreciated! :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlYPnTJt70I

Answer 1

stand up when you sing. it would sound better. you voice is also breathy. Try to sing the note with your whole voice not just a piece of it. :) it would sound better. :)

Answer 2

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1yK4UvIiqZp

Answer 3

does your voice sound different when you sing different songs?
(not like different notes but like styles)

Answer 4

👏👏👏 @Atsie sometimes people just have different opinions :/ its okay

Answer 5

yea

Answer 6

@jigglypuff314 you are an amazing mod sometimes people dont appreciate that but in turn i think that you already knew that and accepted that when you decided to become a mod :)

Answer 7

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0nzrPK9AC2r
Is this better

Answer 8

but, i am still sitting down!

Answer 9

i think what you do is try to conform to the style in which the origional author sings it. dont do that! you sound like you have an amazing voice but you work so hard changing the style of your voice to conform to other's voices that it doesnt sound as good as it should.

Answer 10

i didnt say it sounded better. one can only work on one thing at a time

Answer 11

It's hard not to do that. But, It's like talking without saying um or like unless it is completely necessary

Answer 12

yeah i know; it took me forever to sing my own style instead of someone elses. but now; when i sing i feel amazing doing it. it also sound A LOT better

Answer 13

sounds*

Answer 14

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0q7Bt1zzxcl
this is when i sing my own style in a lower voice!

Answer 15

Don't I sound hideous

Answer 16

\_(-.-)_/ whoever told you that is stupid. but you are still sitting down

Answer 17

umm.. i was moving around okay ill stand up

Answer 18

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Answer 19

lol

Answer 20

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Answer 21

cant do what?

Answer 22

sing standing?

Answer 23

Okay, I did it better this time

Answer 24

okay post it :)

Answer 25

ok

Answer 26

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1VB9e67glvm
I sound sketchy!!!

Answer 27

you went a liiiiittle to high for your vocal range hun

Answer 28

i know my throat started vibrating

Answer 29

try lower notes but sing something like Girls/Girls/Boys by panic at the disco...it might be in your range. if you dont know it then try something else

Answer 30

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0FZtc0GtDeA

Answer 31

its cursing kinda

Answer 32

so sorry i was watching Brandon Urie vines XD

Answer 33

it sounds better-ish it takes time hun. dont force it into one night. It took me a few weeks

Answer 34

@BriellShaw
WOW! I'm so shocked that you attempted that part of Give Your Heart a Break. The part is by no means easy. It took me a long time to sing it to.
Keep in mind your breathing and also the control of your pitch and your notes. Yes, you did sound a bit sketchy (I'm not going to lie) but its a matter of finding where your pitch belongs. You can sing, you just gotta find what works for you. Keep practicing! Don't give up! We all have been where you've been before many a time :)
@RhondaSommer
Yes I know. :) I'm defensive to much of the time of others I think hehe. :D

Answer 35

lol you're good I just want people to improve!