Here are some poems that I just wrote

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ohohaye · Answer

Little Do You See
She smiles but, if you look in her eyes, you can see the sadness plain as day.
She surrounds herself with people but, she is all alone.
She saids she is fine but, she is dying on the inside.

They Don’t Listen
He says that he is sad, they tell him he is fine.
He talks of depression, they tell him he is overreacting.
He talks of suicide, they tell him to stop being a drama queen.
He takes his life, they ask what they ever did wrong.

The Shell Of Me
I am present but, I’m not here.
I am laughing but, crying on the inside.
I smile but, my eyes do not hold the happiness.
I say I’m fine but, I am dying on the inside.
I appear to be perfectly fine but, this is only the shell of me.

bigpapa1 · Answer

Man I relate to these especially the third one.....

candycove · Answer

I don't relate to any of these tbh

truwhovian11 · Answer

i can relate to the third one thae third ones my fav

toloaf · Answer

I can relate. I can especially relate to the second and third ones. 
They're pretty nice.
Keep writing poems. You're awesome!

hope210 · Answer

I can relate to all of them. you did a good job

leahhhmorgannn · Answer

I relate pretty much to all of them. Great job, but did you consider lengthening all of them? I think they might all thrive if you found some way to connect them all, seeing as they all carry a same type of theme. If you can find a way to do that, this would be some phenomenal work.

bigpapa1 · Answer

i kinda agree ^