Question

i need help with this song, i already got a beat, i s and just need more lyric and a title, song in the comments.....

Answer 1

When I first met you I thought everything was good
Sooner I knew I misunderstood
That everything was a dream
Now things arnt what they seem to be
i aint perfect nor pretty
but deep down im filled with beauty
i aint that girl you dream of nor the girl youll fall in love with
i aint the girl i used to be
why you keep judging me from who i was and who i am now
till the day im buried in the ground
i aint hurting now till all the haters take a bow
for god has faith in me the future he let me see
when ill be above an your down below
you gave my heart a shove
but i guess it was all for show
now im the one cryin at night
while you fall asleep in peace
holding myself tight
when my love for you was nothing but fake

Answer 2

do you have any ideas for the title

Answer 3

@karrie631

Answer 4

well the song is more like a girl moving on but cant get him out of her head

Answer 5

i'm just thinking here how about can't get him out of my head or can't get you out of my head

Answer 6

few lyrics here " Needle and thread gotta get you my head needle and thread gonna wind up dead needle and thread gotta get you out of my head needle and thread gonna wind up dead" its from "STITCHES"

Answer 7

These lyrics have some potential. Do you need help writing the music or what?

Answer 8

why are you rhyming?yikes

Answer 9

Why are you so weird about rhyming?

Answer 10

who me? @tanner23456

Answer 11

yeah

Answer 12

yeah why

Answer 13

i really need help being a song writer aint easy /.\

Answer 14

When I first met you I thought everything was good
Sooner I knew I misunderstood
That everything was a dream
Now things arnt what they seem to be
i aint perfect nor pretty
but deep down im filled with beauty
i aint that girl you dream of nor the girl youll fall in love with
i aint the girl i used to be
why you keep judging me from who i was and who i am now
till the day im buried in the ground
i aint hurting now till all the haters take a bow
for god has faith in me the future he let me see
when ill be above an your down below
you gave my heart a shove
but i guess it was all for show
now im the one cryin at night
while you fall asleep in peace
holding myself tight
when my love for you was nothing but fake
I did everything I could to make this right
But all we ever did was just fight
Now its time to move on
Im tired of the cheating you did
And all the lies you hid
I thought we can make it last
But the past is in the past

Needle and thread gotta get you my head
needle and thread gonna wind up dead
needle and thread gotta get you out of my head
needle and thread gonna wind up dead
It's so emotional,
what im feeling

I never been caught between a hard place and a rock

I know hes cheating and i want to have him,
but shes my friend
Dont be mad,cause i set your sh*t on fire
,dont be mad cause your a liar

Dont be scared cause i broke the windows out your car

Dont be mad need to be glad that im still messing with you

Never thought that i could be straight up crazy

Oh yeah its just like that chick that will get you back

If you flirt around im a beat you down

Im a do what i do best

If your with some chick trying to pull a trick you might catch one in your chest

Aint nothing like a girl in love messing round with a straight up fool

You see no im not the one i beat chicks up for fun and im still not goin be mad at you

Listen up real good yeah boy you better play with this here toy

Dont think that you got it like that im in control better watch your back

If you flirt around im goin tear u down im goin fill your life with stress

If i catch a ho coming thru your door im a woop her like the rest
You know when they say

"Addiction controls us all"?

Stuff like drugs and alcohol.

You know it... it takes away that element of control.

And our parents always used to say to us, you know,

"Stay away from drugs."

"Don't do drugs."

"Drugs will mess up your life" and

I completely agree, but...

Love is the most messed up drug of them all.

Answer 15

i love it.u r an amazing song writer

Answer 16

cool you put the lyrics i showed and nice song

Answer 17

need more lyrics

Answer 18

here more but try to put them in your own words karrie




I thought that I've been hurt before
But no one's ever left me quite this sore
Your words cut deeper than a knife
Now I need someone to breathe me back to life

Answer 19

ok but where do i insert them at????

Answer 20

i would call it "get you out of my head" or "Trying to move on without you"

Answer 21

u should make another song then

Answer 22

of getting me out of your head

Answer 23

elite u just got this from the song stitches I thought that I've been hurt before
But no one's ever left me quite this sore
Your words cut deeper than a knife
Now I need someone to breathe me back to life

Answer 24

i know thats why i said to change or put it in different words u no wat i mean like just to get an idea

Answer 25

oh ok

Answer 26

ok hmmm maybe i should just do a remix wouldnt it be better??? an i thought i could call this song * knife to the heart *

Answer 27

Do you have like a verse 1, chorus, bridge, verse 2, and a transition ?

Answer 28

great