Question

I have a new song I want to share with people. I haven't recorded it yet but I have lyrics and I know how the instrumentals will go.

Answer 1

Shadows
By David Masquerade

Verse 1
I've been living in a moment of fear
Trying to escape the pain
That broke me down and I screamed it out
But now I've seen the light and I'm hoping that......
It'll lead me out of the shadows tonight

Verse 2
When will this pain subset
I need it to end
It is killing me
I will not fall victim
To the harsh that words that they scream at me

Chorus
When will I see the light
I need the sun to rise
The shadows are killing me
And I'm trying to avoid the nightmares
That come with the afterlife
So please hold me close and don't let go
I'm drowning in a pool of pain
With no ending
When will it end

Verse 3
This day can't go away
to save my life
I need to find a way where my pain is not hurting me
Oh I'm going down a path that I don't want to see


Please don't let go of me
I need you standing here
Right next to me

Chorus
When will I see the light
I need the sun to rise
The shadows are killing me
And I'm trying to avoid the nightmares
That come with the afterlife

I'll hold you close I don't want you to go away
I need you here standing right by me

For better or worst, for sickness and in health we vowed to be together
And I promised you I won't leave if you didn't leave me in this world without you

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

i like it!

Answer 4

very catchy song

Answer 5

Excellent!

Answer 6

great