Question

Help with a concluding paragraph? 3 sentences. Medal and Fan!

Answer 1

Rules:


Write a definition essay that expands the dictionary definition of an object or concept.

Your paper should include:
An Introduction with a thesis statement (1 paragraph)
At least three body paragraphs that support your thesis statement
A conclusion that provides a sense of closure (1 paragraph)
Your essay should total at least 5 paragraphs

Finally, before submitting your work for grading, please proofread it for grammar and punctuation errors, as well as words that are overused. The words you select make a difference in your grade, so choose them carefully.

Answer 2

What I have so far:

Respect is a positive feeling of admiration or deference for a person or other. Entity and also specific actions and conduct representative of that esteem. Normally when people respect somebody they give some sort of sign, this can be in their language, body language or how they act. Respect should be used in all aspects of life, and be given to everyone around you.
Respect is a valuable thing in life, and although it should be given, it should not be given around freely to each and every stranger. Simple drug dealers should not be given respect, rather teachers and leaders. Respect is also given out to “trainers”, such as in Karate or ju-jitsu. Respect can be earned for doing a great thing in your life, such as winning a war or landing a crashing plane safely.
Having respect is also important in life. For example, you do everything (and maybe extra) correctly in collage. Your collage teacher could recommend you to the certain job you wanted, because he/she respects you for your hard work. Respect can also be earned by just doing lots of little things, like getting your mother coffee every morning, doing lots of extra work every day, or by simply just not lying.
In China, it is not necessary to bow to one another as a greeting or parting gesture. Bowing is generally reserved as a sign of respect for elders and ancestors. The deeper the bow, the more respect they are showing. It is very important that you show respect to people in Japan.

Answer 3

One thing, the last paragraph, you start it off saying "In China..." then end saying "in Japan." Which is it?

Answer 4

Good point @StudyGurl14 ! :)

Answer 5

China.. Just I couldn't find anything more with China, mixing in Japan.

Answer 6

Well, maybe clarify that in the last sentence.
Like this...

"In China, it is not necessary to bow to one another as a greeting or parting gesture. Bowing is generally reserved as a sign of respect for elders and ancestors. For example in Japan, it has been noticed that the deeper the bow the more respect it entails. It is very important to show respect to people who are deserving of it."

I included both of your countries that you mentioned, but just twisted it a tad bit differently. Do you think that works for you?

Answer 7

Yes, Thank you.

Answer 8

No problem! :)

Answer 9

Also, I'd like to conclude that your paragraph is very well written considerably. Good job! Just had that one little bit at the send there that needed a tweak. :)

Answer 10

at the end*
not send. Pardon me :D

Answer 11

Alright, thank you. You were lots of help.

Answer 12

Sure! Happy to help! :)