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OpenStudy (australia.j.):

I know this is math but can somone help me with a Language Arts question. WILL MEDAL AND FAN

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

Hellloooo

OpenStudy (briannabug):

WHATS THE QUESTION?

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

sorry. my computer shut down

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

2.Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax. 3.Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences. 4.Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. My Paragraph: Before the early 1920s, antibiotics did not exist. No forms of powders, ointments, creams, or pills. Their first appearance was in 1928 and are still being developed. Of course kids/adults believed that antibiotics would ALWAYS do well. However are they helping or destroying you? Has anyone ever considered them as a foe? Antibiotics are used to prevent or kill illnesses and infections. Some are used for weight loss and to help your organs. On the other hand, antibiotics can cause severe injuries. This includes, weakness, pain and death.

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

@briannabug you there

OpenStudy (briannabug):

YA JUST GIVE ME A FEW

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

okay

OpenStudy (nathan917):

That intense use of caps, Tho.

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

i know right. feel like she's yelling at me

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

are you still there

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

helllooo

OpenStudy (nathan917):

Heya

OpenStudy (briannabug):

im still here sorry bout the caps I didn't realize they were on....sorry

OpenStudy (nathan917):

What's #1 of the question?

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

oh it's pick a paragraph from your text

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

already did that. just not good at revising

OpenStudy (nathan917):

Ah, Not the best either.. Im currently on my Phone.. Not much help while on it sadly :/

OpenStudy (nathan917):

I'd repost your question in the right topic and see where it goes.

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

I already did. they won't answer

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

@briannabug thanks for trying i think. gave you a medal

OpenStudy (nathan917):

Ah, Close this question and re-open it ;)

OpenStudy (briannabug):

welcome

OpenStudy (australia.j.):

okay @nathan917

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