I know this is math but can somone help me with a Language Arts question. WILL MEDAL AND FAN
Hellloooo
WHATS THE QUESTION?
sorry. my computer shut down
2.Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax. 3.Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences. 4.Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. My Paragraph: Before the early 1920s, antibiotics did not exist. No forms of powders, ointments, creams, or pills. Their first appearance was in 1928 and are still being developed. Of course kids/adults believed that antibiotics would ALWAYS do well. However are they helping or destroying you? Has anyone ever considered them as a foe? Antibiotics are used to prevent or kill illnesses and infections. Some are used for weight loss and to help your organs. On the other hand, antibiotics can cause severe injuries. This includes, weakness, pain and death.
@briannabug you there
YA JUST GIVE ME A FEW
okay
That intense use of caps, Tho.
i know right. feel like she's yelling at me
are you still there
helllooo
Heya
im still here sorry bout the caps I didn't realize they were on....sorry
What's #1 of the question?
oh it's pick a paragraph from your text
already did that. just not good at revising
Ah, Not the best either.. Im currently on my Phone.. Not much help while on it sadly :/
I'd repost your question in the right topic and see where it goes.
I already did. they won't answer
@briannabug thanks for trying i think. gave you a medal
Ah, Close this question and re-open it ;)
welcome
okay @nathan917
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