Question

Guys, I am writing a story and kind of lost hope. I want you guys to review it and see if it kind of have any potential to continue or should I rewrite it with a different narrating style?

http://www.missliterati.com/stories/invisible-crimes-545f178157031320f602983e

Answer 1

wow! That's pretty awesome. Me being a writer as well I say that's great and you shouldn't stop writing. Even I lose hope when writing thinking it's not good at all and sometimes I give up on the story. So if ya need someone to keep ya going just speak to me and I'll help. It's an awesome story I don't think anything needs changed. :)

Answer 2

Thank you very much for your motivational review.

Answer 3

I think you should continue writing it. it is really good

Answer 4

I agree. your story is pretty good so far although i only read the first chapter, i got to say, it's off to a good start, and i like how you started off with the two people questioning such a deep mystifying subject. it gets the reader to think. keep it up! it has potential!

Answer 5

I agree it's really good :)

Answer 6

I tend to lose hope when writing my stories as well XD
I always start them but never finish them, but there's a site(and an app) called Wattpad that helps to motivate me!
You can post your story on there and people can read, vote, and comment on it. There's also a lot of other great writers on there that give good feedback. I suggest giving it a try, it might be helpful in motivating you to finish your story :)

Answer 7

You should post on Wattpad.com Its great

Answer 8

Omg! That's an awesome essay/story! I would recommend you publish it in your school or a website! It would surely get famous! xD

Answer 9

I definitely think you should put this on WattPad so tons of people can read it because it's wonderful.