Question

An Act Of Subversion album thread MKII, because organization and whatnot. Feedback on the writing would be much appreciated.

Answer 1

Tracks in order as they will appear once album is done. Also some tentative cover art is attached. The working life fade transition is going to be a minute or two of instrumentation, and those lyrics are going to be in it, kinda spaced out in the background.

Answer 2

Good lyrics, I think you used good words. However, I think a few of the songs should be just a bit longer. I started out with Feel, and I think it was super awesome, but you should lengthen it a bit more.

Answer 3

Amazing! ^-^

Answer 4

@ballet, thanks for feedback, yo. I'm planning on making them kinda slow and for feel in particular, there are gonna be little instrumental breaks in it and whatnot, so while the lyrics might be short, the song itself won't be.

Answer 5

also thanks, @ShootingStar28

Answer 6

What style of music is it?

Answer 7

meme styled music?

Answer 8

nop

here's part of my inspiration
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6iLpIOnWmI

Answer 9

Nice lyrics!

Answer 10

thanks babe ;*

Answer 11

awesome

Answer 12

thank

Answer 13

Good Job, pewpsie! ^.^

Answer 14

I just done gone and made another thangy

Answer 15

and apparently I made this a lil while ago, but I don't recall when. Hmmmm

Answer 16

here's the tune for the verses on Lose You At The Red Light

Answer 17

who are you what is this hi hello what im new here okay cool

Answer 18

Is that some Mario Kart level song or something

Answer 19

no, it's what I already said it is ya dip
also it's a first draft so ya know

Answer 20

it's beautiful, be mine pls

Answer 21

I would, but I'm already taken. Pic related, it's her:

Answer 22

anyway, here's some bass and a theremin

Answer 23

updated the lyrics for that too

Answer 24

hi there is an accoustic guitar part now

Answer 25

hi the guitar part was too loud so I fixed it

Answer 26

finally finished it!
https://soundcloud.com/nathaniel-david-washtub/lose-you-at-the-red-light

Answer 27

here's something I dunno if I wanna continue it or how I would idk

Answer 28

here's an update on it I guess

Answer 29

Hello

Answer 30

ayy

here's a new thing I just started

Answer 31

oop, wrong one

Answer 32

before I go to bed:

Answer 33

k so here's the final album art

Answer 34

here's maybe an improvement on the last song but idk