Question

I wrote something please look at it and give me feedback
http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/56bb545be4b0548ff6116144

Answer 1

@BrownieCat @CandyCove @Decarr432 @Electric_Blue @Hauntedwoodsgal @ILovePuppiesLol @just_one_last_goodbye @Keigh2015 @Pinkybottom67 @Qwertty123 @RhondaSommer

Answer 2

WOW nice! :)

Answer 3

I cant download it sorry

Answer 4

thanks so much! I like writing, but I hardly ever share it.

Answer 5

YOU did a VERY AMAZING JOB AT IT !:D

Answer 6

From hearing my friend read it, it sounded nice.

Answer 7

Thank you all for reading it or trying to. @Hauntedwoodsgal here is one of them if you'd still like to read it:

Dear reader,
Hello. I can’t wait to see you, meet you, scare you, and make you be terrified. Even if you say otherwise, you’ve got me and I’ll never leave. I’m like a virus that takes over the mind. Eating away at everything there is, until it’s all gone. I’ll drive you mad, I’ll make you shriek, but I’ll never make you smile. You hate me and that makes me laugh. You run away, but I’ll always find you. I’m everywhere. With everyone. I lurk in the shadows and I burn in the light. I’m lightning quick, so you’ll never know when I’m there. Until I pounce, like a lion to prey. I know your secrets. I know your weaknesses. I use them against you. People call me by many names. They name everything I bring. You can just call me…
Forever in your mind,
Fear

Answer 8

NICE!!!!!!!!!

Answer 9

You are a very talented writer!!!(:

Answer 10

Thank you!! I have another I can send if you'd like, but personally I think it's worse.

Answer 11

Hmm Your such an AMAZING writer! I can't write

Answer 12

I personally love what I have seen. You give a very good description of each one(:

Answer 13

Here is the other for you Haunted and any others who can't download it.

Dear reader,
I am the most pleasant one with you. I have great powers. I am only with you at some points, but sometimes you enjoy me while other times you don't like me. I bring happiness, but most times I surely bring darkness and suffering close behind. I'm not proud of it. I don't mean it. I am in a place where so few people can be. And sometimes those people there don't deserve that rightful place. You are great and amazing. I wish you the best of luck. Find someone special. That doesn't mean boyfriend or girlfriend, but it can mean family or friends. Don't be fooled. It's a harsh world and you don't deserve all of that hatred. I break easily and cannot be so easily put back together.
Forever in your heart,
Love

Answer 14

Amazing just awesome

Answer 15

Very nice ghostelle! What genre is this written in? Poem, narrative story, what?

Answer 16

Thanks!! Um... I never really thought which genre it was I sort of pictured it being written as a letter.

Answer 17

Well, that is a nice story! Medal for thy effort!

Answer 18

THANK YOU EVERYONE!! I WAS ORIGINALLY AFRAID TO SHARE MY WRITING, BECAUSE PEOPLE CAN BE MEAN, SO BY EVERYONE BEING SO NICE AND POSITIVE I'LL MAKE SURE TO LET YOU KNOW WHEN I POST SOMETHING ELSE, JUST LOOK FOR ME IN THE WRITING AREA. I'LL BE SURE TO TAG YOU GUYS!!

Answer 19

Wow that was pretty good. Keep it up ghostie!

Answer 20

Aw!!! so sweet

Answer 21

@tootzrll

Answer 22

i agree with them!!! ^^^^^^ u r a GOLDEN writer! keep it up girly! :)

Answer 23

Thank you so much!!!