Question

Arrange word order foe coherence and emphasis: " I recommend these management performance improvement incentives."

Answer 1

Well look at the sentence. I recommend these management performance improvement incentives. You are trying to achieve coherence(being logical and consistent) and emphasis(special importance, value, or prominence given to something). What would you say?

Answer 2

@briantaylor

Answer 3

I recommend incentives for improved management performance.

Answer 4

Correct again

Answer 5

Thanks.

Answer 6

No problem at all!