Question

Poem: Days Gone By...

Answer 1

I DEAL with the pain and anger,
The ever near, deathly danger
I DEAL with the anxiety and panic attacks,
It's just time for me to face the facts.

I'VE DEALT with the bullies and oppressors,
Beaten down, no shelters
I'VE DEALT with the woulds and scars,
The endless nights spent sleeping under the stars

I WILL DEAL with the rumors and the lies,
Cutting and stabbing, attacking me with knives
I WILL DEAL with the suicidal thoughts and regrets,
I can't right now, too much going on to fret


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Answer 2

I'm so done.

Answer 3

This is how the poem should be read, I didn't edit it as for all of my poems are written on the spot. I swapped the first and second verses.

I'VE DEALT with the bullies and oppressors,
Beaten down, no shelters
I'VE DEALT with the woulds and scars,
The endless nights spent sleeping under the stars

I DEAL with the pain and anger,
The ever near, deathly danger
I DEAL with the anxiety and panic attacks,
It's just time for me to face the facts.

I WILL DEAL with the rumors and the lies,
Cutting and stabbing, attacking me with knives
I WILL DEAL with the suicidal thoughts and regrets,
I can't right now, too much going on to fret

Answer 4

This is really good. You can hear the raw emotion and feelings you have put in this poem. The rhymes aren't forced like in some poems and it really flows from past, present, and future. Good job.

Answer 5

:3 this is really good!

Answer 6

do watcha do. just give me credits if u post it or anything

Answer 7

Way to bring on the feels, man. ;-; This poem is amazing, though. It is very genuine. It is also rather relatable in a melancholy and sincere way. Awesome job! I really like it a lot. ^^

Answer 8

Beautiful love the feels makes me feel as it is me. Just reading it makes me feel empowerment like I just stepped into the present facing my life as it taunts my issues in front of me.

Answer 9

Amazing!!! 😍

Answer 10

Awesome! But, I would add though a conclusion to the poem though.