Poem: Days Gone By
I'VE DEALT with the bullies and oppressors, Beaten down, no shelters I'VE DEALT with the woulds and scars, The endless nights spent sleeping under the stars I DEAL with the pain and anger, The ever near, deathly danger I DEAL with the anxiety and panic attacks, It's just time for me to face the facts. I WILL DEAL with the rumors and the lies, Cutting and stabbing, attacking me with knives I WILL DEAL with the suicidal thoughts and regrets, I can't right now, too much going on to fret
Constructive criticism is welcome! Tag people you think will enjoy. @RhondaSommer @myah @Safa102 @Hayhayz @Mehek14 @Awolflover1 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @alones
WOW @Comrad this is really good!!!! I like how you used I'VE DEALT....I DEAL...and I WILL DEAL...in your poem....this is really good...I could relate too this poem as well. I absolutely LOVEEEEEE how you used the words!!!!! I could read that poem all day! It was honestly the foremost poem I have ever read in like 2 years!! I am compassionate for this poem...it Truly relates too my life :)
wow O.O that was keep this is amazing babe....ur talented
I believe you meant deep safa lol. And thanks Safa. Skyler I am flattered! I didn't grammar check and do structure checks, I write my poems on the spot.
This is an amazing poem, i'v dealt with it too.
# amzing poem
@Comrad keep up the awe-inspiring, appreciable, and downright AWESOME job!!!!!!! No need too thanks me.....for I am telling you a fact!!!
:D tag people you think would like it
Its true, Keep working @Comrad ur an amazing and inspiring person this poem speaks to people <333
@tootzrll
@Electric_Blue
@Mehek14
Mekey read it already.
oh...i'll tag everybody else tho i mean who wouldn't like this
people that don't understand the struggle. and people that dislike me.
@poopsiedoodle
@Serenity74
I'm 12 and what is this
awesome poem, comrad! sky and safa r right. keep this up! ur a talented writer, bruh!
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ty @tootzrll
@pooja195
@CandyCove
candy read it and dislikes it
:O how ....just how i think she's never seen something called fricken amazing!
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