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OpenStudy (comrad):

Poem: Days Gone By

OpenStudy (comrad):

I'VE DEALT with the bullies and oppressors, Beaten down, no shelters I'VE DEALT with the woulds and scars, The endless nights spent sleeping under the stars I DEAL with the pain and anger, The ever near, deathly danger I DEAL with the anxiety and panic attacks, It's just time for me to face the facts. I WILL DEAL with the rumors and the lies, Cutting and stabbing, attacking me with knives I WILL DEAL with the suicidal thoughts and regrets, I can't right now, too much going on to fret

OpenStudy (comrad):

Constructive criticism is welcome! Tag people you think will enjoy. @RhondaSommer @myah @Safa102 @Hayhayz @Mehek14 @Awolflover1 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @alones

OpenStudy (skylyerbailey):

WOW @Comrad this is really good!!!! I like how you used I'VE DEALT....I DEAL...and I WILL DEAL...in your poem....this is really good...I could relate too this poem as well. I absolutely LOVEEEEEE how you used the words!!!!! I could read that poem all day! It was honestly the foremost poem I have ever read in like 2 years!! I am compassionate for this poem...it Truly relates too my life :)

OpenStudy (safa102):

wow O.O that was keep this is amazing babe....ur talented

OpenStudy (comrad):

I believe you meant deep safa lol. And thanks Safa. Skyler I am flattered! I didn't grammar check and do structure checks, I write my poems on the spot.

OpenStudy (safa102):

This is an amazing poem, i'v dealt with it too.

OpenStudy (safa102):

# amzing poem

OpenStudy (skylyerbailey):

@Comrad keep up the awe-inspiring, appreciable, and downright AWESOME job!!!!!!! No need too thanks me.....for I am telling you a fact!!!

OpenStudy (comrad):

:D tag people you think would like it

OpenStudy (safa102):

Its true, Keep working @Comrad ur an amazing and inspiring person this poem speaks to people <333

OpenStudy (comrad):

@tootzrll

OpenStudy (safa102):

@Electric_Blue

OpenStudy (safa102):

@Mehek14

OpenStudy (comrad):

Mekey read it already.

OpenStudy (safa102):

oh...i'll tag everybody else tho i mean who wouldn't like this

OpenStudy (comrad):

people that don't understand the struggle. and people that dislike me.

OpenStudy (comrad):

@poopsiedoodle

OpenStudy (safa102):

@Serenity74

OpenStudy (poopsiedoodle):

I'm 12 and what is this

OpenStudy (tootzrll):

awesome poem, comrad! sky and safa r right. keep this up! ur a talented writer, bruh!

OpenStudy (safa102):

ikr

OpenStudy (comrad):

ty @tootzrll

OpenStudy (comrad):

@pooja195

OpenStudy (safa102):

@CandyCove

OpenStudy (comrad):

candy read it and dislikes it

OpenStudy (safa102):

:O how ....just how i think she's never seen something called fricken amazing!

OpenStudy (serenity74):

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