Can somebody look over some paragraphs that I wrote for History class, please? (Medal and Fan!)

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eyesnapper · Answer

I wrote three paragraphs on the Erie, Suez, and Panama Canals. One for each. Each paragraph is supposed to include, Who planned or constructed the canal and when it was finished, The benefits and disadvantages of the construction of the canal and who experienced them, How the construction of the canal supported nation building or imperialism, and The role technology played in the construction of the canal and empire building.

dogzcatz · Answer

Seems good besides Construction ended in 1825. should be The construction ended in 1825.

e51 · Answer

i the first paragraph do not press enter, and what @DogzCatz siad

eyesnapper · Answer

@e51 Wait, what about the first paragraph?

e51 · Answer

you pressed enter after the first sentence and in the third, if you think you didn't look in the question box you made

eyesnapper · Answer

Oh , I see. Thank you for telling me @e51 . :)

eyesnapper · Answer

Thank you both for helping me! ^^ I fanned you both.