So my teacher asked me to put together a piece of work on the downfalls of America. What do you think?

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misssmartiez · Answer

Wow, that was nicely done, I like what you have included! It doesn't seem like a welcome now does it XD!

misssmartiez · Answer

Seems sarcastic but overall, it is very well put and nice!~

rhondasommer · Answer

lol that was the goal for the sarcasm :)

misssmartiez · Answer

Lol, 'welcome to America! Survival of the fittest, be eaten.. or get eaten.'

misssmartiez · Answer

I love it! I love sarcasm for some reason xD

rhondasommer · Answer

basically tho

misssmartiez · Answer

Oh what does the first line mean? When you say Were every girl on the front cover, isn't even the girl on the front cover?

rhondasommer · Answer

$\huge\cal\color{black}{"Welcome~to~America"}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{By:~Rhonda~Sommer}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~the~girl~on~the~front~cover}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{Isn't~even~the~girl~on~the~front~cover}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Were~the~man~in~the~magazine}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{Is~photo~shopped~for~more~muscles}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Welcome~to~America}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~double~standards~are~common}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{And~rudeness~is~expected}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~laziness~is~frequent}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{And~poor~work~is~unevaluated}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Welcome~to~America}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~you~can~get~bullied}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{For~wearing~glasses}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~you~can~be~made~fun~of}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{For~a~genetic~disability}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Welcome~to~America}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~fast~food~is~the~common~eating~place}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{But~you're~expected~to~be~skinny}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Where~good~grades~are~expected}$
$\large\cal\color{black}{And~frustrated~kids~don’t~get~the~help~they~need}$
 
$\large\cal\color{black}{Welcome~to~America.}$

misssmartiez · Answer

Do you mean that they cover up her real looks with photo shops make up, and etc?

rhondasommer · Answer

yes

misssmartiez · Answer

Ohhhh

misssmartiez · Answer

Yes, amazing job!

rhondasommer · Answer

i mean; by the time they are done; the girl on the fron cover isnt even the girl on the front cover lol

alexandervonhumboldt2 · Answer

ummm sorry but realllyyyyy , when i read this i feel like just reading a book, not a *poem*

rhondasommer · Answer

lol its not supposed to be a book. so....

rhondasommer · Answer

@AlexandervonHumboldt2

rhondasommer · Answer

*sigh* fine ill redo it. none of my work seems "good enough" anyway lately