Question

Can anyone help me with my writing?

Answer 1

What type of writing is it?

Answer 2

Informative

Answer 3

Can you help me?

Answer 4

Yes

Answer 5

Ok so I don't think I did a good job with it but I'll show you them explain the directions ok?

Answer 6

Alright, sounds good.

Answer 7

People think the only reason earthquakes occur because of nature but, we have an effect on the Earth too. Drilling into the Earth to make new houses and buildings don't always have the outcome we desire. Mining can cause the plates underground to shift which make earthquakes.

Answer 8

I have to underline sentences in the introduction that engage readers. Should I change anything.

Answer 9

The first sentence should go like this; People think Earthquakes only occur because of nature, but we also have an effect on the Earth.

Answer 10

Ok anything else and also what shoould I underline in that paragraph that engage readers?

Answer 11

Preferably the first sentence of the paragraph.

Answer 12

Ok next paragraph.

Answer 13

Earthquakes have a huge impact on humans and we need to strive to keep the natural disasters to a minimum. Between global warming and fracking we're basically inviting earthquakes. Humans always blame construction workers but they aren't the only ones at fault. When we pull weeds and stray roots we make the Earth worse.

Answer 14

I have to circle textual evidence for this one.

Answer 15

Again, the first sentence seems like the best way to engage the readers!!

Answer 16

Ok

Answer 17

@mathmale
Sir, can you take a look at the third post down from this?
Sorry to interrupt, but I need you there

Answer 18

Deforestation doesn't help either. When earthquakes occur may people get hurt and some lose their lives. The money it takes to pay your insurance company for damage is enough to feed a whole city twice! An Earthquake kills, injures and leaves people homeless.

Answer 19

I need to put check marks by transitional words but I don't have any so can you help me?

Answer 20

You could change it up like this; However, deforestation doesn't help either. When earthquakes occur many people get hurt and more importantly, some lose their lives. To put it briefly, the money it takes to pay your insure company for damage is enough to feed a whole city twice! As was previously stated, and Earthquake kills, injures and leaves people homeless.

Answer 21

Your a life saver can you stay a bit longer I have a bit more.

Answer 22

I can stay until 3:25. Glad to help! :)

Answer 23

Thx

Answer 24

During Earthquakes soil liquidizes. Roads buckle and everything we have to support us is gone. Like in Gondwana Earth's continents aren't fixed in place so the slide. Therefore, making new land forms. The process is not gentle.

Answer 25

For that one I have to do the same thing put a chheckmark by transitional words but I don't have enough.

Answer 26

During Earthquakes soil liquidizes. Also, roads buckle and everything we have to support us is gone. Unfortunately, Gondwana Earth's continents aren't fixed in place so they slide. More importantly, we make new land forms. However, the process is not gentle.

Answer 27

For the last paragraph I need to make a summary of everything I wrote. Can you help me with that?

Answer 28

Hello?

Answer 29

People think Earthquakes only occur because of nature, but we also have an effect on the Earth. Drilling into the Earth to make new houses can effect our Earth. We don't always have the outcome we desire. Mining can also cause the plates underground to shift which makes Earthquakes. Earthquakes have a huge impact on humans and we needs to strive to keep the natural disasters to a minimum. However, between global warming and fracking we're basically inviting Earthquakes. Humans always blame construction workers but they aren't the only ones at fault. When we pull weeds and stray roots we make the Earth worse. However, deforestation doesn't help either. When Earthquakes occur many people get hurt and more importantly, some lose their lives. To put it briefly, the money it takes to pay your insurance company for damage is enough to feed a whole city twice! As previously stated, an Earthquake kills, injures and leaves people homeless. Roads buckle, soil liquidizes. Unfortunately, Gondwana earth's continents aren't fixed in place so they slide. More importantly, we make new land forms. However, the process is not gentle.

Answer 30

Thanks!

Answer 31

You're Welcome!

Answer 32

I need a ending paragraph now with evidence from the text.

Answer 33

In the paragraphs that you wrote, did you look them up? If so, then put down the site that you visited and that should be evidence enough.

Answer 34

Ok thanks