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Would someone please look over my paper I am horrible at writing just a little help will do! Meadle and fan!!

Answer 1

On The Spectrum


The Autism Spectrum includes not just Autism but also Asperger Syndrome, pervasive developmental disorder not otherwise specified (PDD-NOS), and childhood disintegrative disorder. Autism and Asperger’s are the most common and heard about. Autism Spectrum is often referred to as “on the spectrum”. Loud and crowded places are uncomfortable for people who are “On the Spectrum”. Life overall is harder for people who are “On the Spectrum”.


Autism mainly effects males, out of every four people with autism there is only one female. People with Autism have something they are focused on and don’t want to do anything else, this can range on things like video games to cooking. Autistic people also have occasional outbursts where they can hurt themselves or others. When people have Autism they also hate change which can give them anxiety. Autism is very serious and effects many people.


Asperger Syndrome also known as Asperger Disorder is a part of the Autism Spectrum. People with Asperger’s have problems with social interaction such as just having a simple conversation. They also have restricted and repetitive patterns of behavior and interests, meaning they have one point of interest. Asperger’s is also very serious with many people who have Asperger’s it is also very common.


For loud noises people with Autism and Asperger’s can use noise canceling headphones to help. They also can take a type of medicine to help keep them calm or nonviolent. They can take another medication for anxiety. Females can just find quirky friends or have friends that are younger or older then them to help with their social interaction.


“On the Spectrum” has a mix of different disorders with almost the same symptoms. There is no cure, however there is medication to help. Social interaction problems to anxiety are very difficult. They also have trouble with outbursts and self-abuse. Life is very difficult for people who are “On the Spectrum”.
Sites Used: http://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/medications-for-autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism_spectrum
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asperger_syndrome

Answer 2

It looks good what is it for?

Answer 3

Research Paper for school I do k12 and I have a sister with asperger syndrome and a brother with autism

Answer 4

put periods before end quotes :D

Answer 5

Thank you!

Answer 6

On The Spectrum


The Autism Spectrum includes not just Autism but also Asperger Syndrome, pervasive developmental disorder not otherwise specified (PDD-NOS), and childhood disintegrative disorder. Autism and Asperger’s are the most common and heard about. Autism Spectrum is often referred to as “on the spectrum”. Loud and crowded places are uncomfortable for people who are “On the Spectrum.” Life overall is harder for people who are “On the Spectrum.”


Autism mainly effects males, out of every four people with autism there is only one female. People with Autism have something they are focused on and don’t want to do anything else, this can range on things like video games to cooking. Autistic people also have occasional outbursts where they can hurt themselves or others. When people have Autism they also hate change which can give them anxiety. Autism is very serious and effects many people.


Asperger Syndrome also known as Asperger Disorder is a part of the Autism Spectrum. People with Asperger’s have problems with social interaction such as just having a simple conversation. They also have restricted and repetitive patterns of behavior and interests, meaning they have one point of interest. Asperger’s is also very serious with many people who have Asperger’s it is also very common.


For loud noises people with Autism and Asperger’s can use noise canceling headphones to help. They also can take a type of medicine to help keep them calm or nonviolent. They can take another medication for anxiety. Females can just find quirky friends or have friends that are younger or older then them to help with their social interaction.


“On the Spectrum” has a mix of different disorders with almost the same symptoms. There is no cure, however there is medication to help. Social interaction problems to anxiety are very difficult. They also have trouble with outbursts and self-abuse. Life is very difficult for people who are “On the Spectrum.”


Sites Used: http://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/medications-for-autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism_spectrum
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asperger_syndrome
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Answer 7

a couple corrections to make it flow better :)
range from instead of range to
only one in four
When people have Autism they also hate change as it gives them anxiety.

Answer 8

"females can just find quirky friends" you might want to leave out the just :)

Answer 9

But pretty good actually!

Answer 10

Thank you!

Answer 11

On The Spectrum


The Autism Spectrum includes not just Autism but also Asperger Syndrome, pervasive developmental disorder not otherwise specified (PDD-NOS), and childhood disintegrative disorder. Autism and Asperger’s are the most common and heard about. Autism Spectrum is often referred to as “on the spectrum”. Loud and crowded places are uncomfortable for people who are “On the Spectrum.” Life overall is harder for people who are “On the Spectrum.”


Autism mainly effects males, but only one out of four people with autism is female. People with Autism have something they are focused on and don’t want to do anything else, this can range from things like video games to cooking. Autistic people also have occasional outbursts where they can hurt themselves or others. When people have Autism they also hate change which gives them anxiety. Autism is very serious and effects many people.


Asperger Syndrome also known as Asperger Disorder is a part of the Autism Spectrum. People with Asperger’s have problems with social interaction such as just having a simple conversation. They also have restricted and repetitive patterns of behavior and interests, meaning they have one point of interest. Asperger’s is also very serious with many people who have Asperger’s it is also very common.


For loud noises people with Autism and Asperger’s can use noise canceling headphones to help. They also can take a type of medicine to help keep them calm or nonviolent. They can take another medication for anxiety. Females can find quirky friends or have friends that are younger or older then them to help with their social interaction.


“On the Spectrum” has a mix of different disorders with almost the same symptoms. There is no cure, however there is medication to help. Social interaction problems to anxiety are very difficult. They also have trouble with outbursts and self-abuse. Life is very difficult for people who are “On the Spectrum.”


Sites Used: http://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/medications-for-autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autism_spectrum
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asperger_syndrome
Even Newer and improved

Answer 12

"even newer and improved" lol ;) nice!!

Answer 13

:D