Question

Can someone tell me if this sounds okay?


We're stuck in the dark a room of debris but something is wedged between you and me. My hearts bounding as the water starts pouring in. Why'd we have to stay at death's inn? If this is the end I dread saying goodbye, but it's finally time to die. New York's lights may shine bright, but our light has faded and new dreams are recreated. Maybe one day we'll be reincarnated. My demons feed off of fear and sorrow. I know now that I won't be here tomorrow. Running on pure adrenaline, finally time has ended.

Answer 1

This sounds amazing!! I love it :D

Answer 2

Thanks!

Answer 3

This sounds really nice! If you plan on having background music, this would sound really good with jazz piano music

Answer 4

no problem Dude :D

Answer 5

So amazing wow I am stunned

Answer 6

that is amazing

Answer 7

Nice! Very creative.

Answer 8

Very nice! You got some talent! :)

Answer 9

great