HELP NOW!! FAN AND MEDAL!! I need to write an argumentative essay about the CONS of E-Cigarettes. PLEASE CHECK!!
To start off let me just say that every smoking tobacco is bad. Electronic Cigarettes, or e-cigarettes are battery-powering devices filled with liquid nicotine which is a highly addictive chemical that is dissolved in a solution of water and propylene glycol. Some tobacco includes chew, spit, dip, snuff, and a host of new dissolvable products. It causes many significant health problems, including several types of cancer. About 80 percent of the people who smoke have a higher risk of getting oral cancer and have a 60 percent higher risk of pancreatic and esophageal cancer. Tobacco products can also increase the risk of a deadly heart attack and stroke. Every day about 1,315 people in the US die because of smoking. Now let's talk about what is bad. We all know that this type of smoking is the most common danger to your health factor, the original cigarette. Cigarettes contain about 600 ingredients. Every cigarette you smoke damages your breathing and scars your lungs. Smoking can cause cancer almost anywhere in your body. Number one reason, where it comes from. The accursed plant called Tobacco. Tobacco is a plant that is used for smoking products. This particular plant consists of a very addictive chemical called nicotine. Which is actually a pesticide! This is used to kill the insects that attempt to eat the tobacco! The nicotine does not just kill and or harm the insect, but it harms us also. Just in long-termed consequences. Unlike the insect, they have immediate effects resulting death right after they consume the plant. Regardless if the user consumes it by smoking and or chewing, it releases the chemicals from the leaves into the bloodstream. Did I forget to mention that nicotine is a stimulant? Well, it is. Stimulants are drugs that increase the user's activity in the nervous system. Immediate effects are increased heart rate and blood pressure, also, editions in our brains that usually leads to the factor. Nicotine triggers the brain by stimulated the area that is in charge of feelings of pleasure and reward. So, first time users usually feel sick, but usual users feel more sensations because they are used to the effects and their brains are rewired to consume more and more nicotine. Tobacco takers may be in the risk of developing psychological dependence. This is because they depend so much on these harmful products to deal with stress, pleasure, etc. Preventing them to withdrawal from this product. When nicotine is burnt, it releases over 4,000 chemicals.
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Can you please check my essay to make sure there are no errors please? @LeapordLady639
I can try
so your style of writing is good .i dont see any big mistakes that like pop out at me so your good
I can see places in the second paragraph that can be improved
First you could improve it by saying 'We all know the original cigarette is the most common danger to you health factor." Second you could say "Every cigarette scars your lungs which damages your breathing." Lastly I think that you should put "Just in long-termed consequences." in parentheses.
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