Okay...i'm going to go TLT so here goes... it's been so long since i lasted posted a song! lol anyways yesh new songs YAY lol

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drawwithapurpose · Answer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrUvWGe2Ras&list=PLqGTwkklUTaC5IhN5lSgqgy-cW9dPcKAT&index=7

anonymous · Answer

Nice! I love it!

tanner23456 · Answer

I'm going to be honest so please don't mistake it for negativism or demeaning criticism. Also, I realize that I'm biased because I really don't enjoy anything close to this type of music. I'll be honest and say I skipped over a few parts because of repetition but I can definitely tell that the author, I'm assuming you, had very limited background in music theory. There's not much of a structure. It was difficult to detect any sort of melody at all. The thing the bothered me the most, however, was the seemingly sporadic chord progressions. When I could detect a chord progression it contradicted heavily with whatever was being played over the top and in the background as well as the next phrase of the song. You might want to invest some time in understanding how to properly structure a song in real life and then try and translate that into the digital world. Well, done in having the confidence to post this I know it's not always easy and I'm sure this was a fair bit of work to do. I only give suggestions out of observation and desire for the in musical scholastics for society.

drawwithapurpose · Answer

ohmygosh! Thank you so much @tanner23456 ! I've been waiting for someone to give me an honest criticism on my work! I do, however, have limited resources to use. Thanks again!