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Answer 1

This is a story of a couple who was meant to be.
Was being the keyword but even the cutest couple can be set free.
She was the outcast and he was the geek.
Both were so beautiful and shared a lot in common even their clique.
They hath known each other for a while.
Nothing could set them apart they seemed forever
They believe there was nothing that could have them severed
They were right nobody else could break them apart
but just like that they weren't careful at heart
and just like that things went downhill
Johnny got jealous and Darla lost trust
Arguing they were, everyday and revival was a must
No matter how hard they tried, they couldn't work it out
They were supposed to be forever that was without a doubt
All good things come to an end by life or death
Sometimes you just got to cherish what's left.
Johnny and Darla were heartbroken and distraught
Now they wish they never faught......

So I wrote this for a meaning. Fellas, the moral of this story is to remember why you started loving him/her. He was or even is your world. It's impossible for anything to destroy that, unless one is murdered. The only one that destroys the relationship are the people in it. I learned that LDR and IRL the biggest relationship killer is jealousy..... but you got to remember the reason you guys fell in love. In every argument remember he/she is your world. Remember the reason you fell in love. :)

Answer 2

WOW.... thats amazing!!!! :D

Answer 3

Thank you (:

Answer 4

your an amazing writer.... i absolutely love it!!! :)

Answer 5

That is AMAZING! Like @mustbethestars! WOW! That is SOOO COOL! :D Great Job! :D

Answer 6

Thanks (:

Answer 7

You Welcome! WOW So cool! :D

Answer 8

If only my ex seen this xD but yes @mustbethestars you are a great writer and as a fellow writer myself i give you my praises on your sucess and love is something that should be fought for no matter how hard or tough it is so i completely agree with 100!

Answer 9

This is good! :)

Answer 10

WOO HOO THAT A LOT <3 I lvoe it

Answer 11

Awesome!! ^o^

Answer 12

Wow.
Beautifully written, and what a powerful message!
It is sad how relationships end like this. Remember the good things, the reasons why you fell in love. Don't ever doubt each other. If you get jealous, remember that the other person is only interested in you, therefore there is no need to be jealous. It's difficult, but it can be done.

Wonderful word choice and a great message! Well done! :)

Answer 13

Wow! That was truly amazing! Good luck in life! xD

Answer 14

Omg I feel bad I could only give out one medal all you guys deserve medals for taking the time to read it and leave feedback.

Answer 15

@mustbethestars well you deserve all da medals ;)

Answer 16

Awe thanks @ayeedomo I appreciate it but believe it or not I am more unselfish and kind of feel bad that the positive feedback isn't getting medals but oh well. Thanks so much people I love you all (:

Answer 17

Woah! Amazing story! Listen to mine: there was a cat. He sat on a mat. :D

Answer 18

That's a good start :)

Answer 19

lol xD

Answer 20

+1! i like it!:) @mustbethestars