Question

New Part of my story (tell me if i need to add anything I had a bit of a hard time with this one chapter/ give me a minute to post it)

Answer 1

Greyson climbed on the bus and was about to go to the back like he, Ray, and Luke would usually do but his eyes landed on something that he disapproved. Katy was leaning against Knight's Shoulder. He stops Ray and Luke and points at the two.
"This isn't good, boys. Not one bit." The two boys nodded their heads and frowns.
"What are ya going to do, Grey?" Ray, the younger one of the two best friends asked.
"I'm going to sit down. No need to keep the bus driver waiting. Go take our seats."
He moved to the seat that Katy and Knight where sitting in.
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Knight was rudely awaken by something coming between him and something warm. It was suddenly cold and he was freezing. He groaned as he realized what was happening.That guy, Greyson, had sat between him and... Katy? Oh yea, he remembered, he was talking to Katy then fell asleep. Katy herself, groaned and complained at Greyson, who had a smile on his face as he settled down.
"What's up, guys?"
Knight heard Katy groan and thought if Katy didn't like Greyson, then he would like and befriend Greyson just to get rid of Katy. He smiled and placed his arm around Greyson shoulders.
"Hey Greyson, my pal. Nothing much, you?"
Greyson stared at him as if saying, 'what the heck are you doing?' Greyson looked as if he was about to speak but Katy spoke up first.
"I see ya met Grey. He's a big pain in the rear." She spoke quickly before moving seats quietly to sit with her girl friends.
He sat there before Greyson jerked his arm off his shoulder.
"What was that, dude? Putting your arm around my shoulder?"
Knight shrugged and looked out the window before sighing and looked back at Greyson.
"Hey? Umm... thanks. I don't know what for but thanks." Knight smiled.
Greyson laughed and replied, "Maybe for helping you out with Katy?"
Before he could answer Greyson socked him in the arm and nodded his head. Not to be weak but he admitted that it hurt. Not long Greyson had his earplugs in listening to some type of loud music, while he lean his head on the window and stared at the world on the other side. Unaware of the eyes staring at him.
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Katy sat silently, staring at Knight's back. Greyson may have stole him away from her just now but she promised that he would be hers. She turned her attention to her few friends but didn't stop thinking of a way to make the new kid her boy friend.
"Katy, stop daydreaming."
She looked up into the eyes of her best friend, Bethany Young, who was standing over her, hands on hips. Then she looked around, nobody was on the bus then back to her friend.
"Get up."
She got up, grabbed her bag, walked down the aisle and off the bus. Bethany close behind.

Answer 2

@CuriousQuestions how's it? Got any ideals?

Answer 3

Let me look over it.

PS Sorry for not editing your story yet. I've been super busy with High School and I have already said yes to editing somebody else's story before yours, but i promise i will get to it ASAP. :)

Answer 4

lol It's ok i've been busy with high school too lol

Answer 5

lol Ok. Well, I just finished reading it. I'm trying to think of something else to add to it. I like what you wrote.

Answer 6

Thanks and 'kay. btw i haven't posted anything yet on qoutev so it won't be up

Answer 7

Oh, do you want me to make you a cover for this story?

Answer 8

Ok

Answer 9

Ya can if you want I haven't got anything yet

Answer 10

Ok. What's the title, author's name, and what you want on the cover? If you can't think of the last one, that one is optional. I can always figure that out. lol

Answer 11

@Ray_Masters

Answer 12

the title's name is His book of Secrets' (idk if i'm going to change it or not yet) btw I'm not sure what i want on the cover so you can go wild with that lol

Answer 13

lol and the author's name?

Answer 14

btw have you gotten an account yet on qoutev yet? (no rush) and the author's name is just my username lol

Answer 15

@Ray_Masters Yes, I made an account on quotev. And ok.

Answer 16

My username is Mystical Meadow (I couldn't really think of a better username lol) :)

Answer 17

lol ok i'll try to find ya

Answer 18

er never mind lol

Answer 19

lol My profile pic is the one with the nightmare (flaming horse)

Answer 20

@Ray_Masters Which username, Mystogan or Ray_Masters?

Answer 21

ummm go with Ray but don't add the _ lol

Answer 22

ok lol

Answer 23

what's your fav color?

Answer 24

Red

Answer 25

ok

Answer 26

@Ray_Masters here

Answer 27

wow that's awesome

Answer 28

@Ray_Masters thx i still have to put your name on it though

Answer 29

ok it's still nice though

Answer 30

thx

Answer 31

well, i might have to do that later on my laptop. im supposed to be doing schoolwork on my desktop computer and technically, my mom doesn't really know about me on OS. lol i can still mostly chat though.

Answer 32

well, im rather doing both rn

Answer 33

Same I'm supposed to be doing math XD

Answer 34

XD I'm currently doing biology

Answer 35

It makes it a lot easier that my courses are online

Answer 36

Same XD

Answer 37

What school do you use?

Answer 38

I use k12 and im a freshman

Answer 39

i take flvs and i'm in ninth grade

Answer 40

flvs? Never heard

Answer 41

it's not that good

Answer 42

constantly having to work

Answer 43

hm same here

Answer 44

oh, shoot. I have a unit 2 exam! XP I hate unit exams. Well, i guess on the unit 1 exam, i only missed 1 question out of either 15 or 20 questions.

Answer 45

wish me luck

Answer 46

gl

Answer 47

Well, it's only 10 questions this time and it's on Computer Literacy

Answer 48

thx

Answer 49

i just called my teacher for a DBA (Discussion-Based Assessment) now I gotta do a test (ugh) so brb

Answer 50

ok

Answer 51

oops, i got 12 out of 20 points. oh boy

Answer 52

shoot, my grade went from A to B.

Answer 53

gl on your DBA

Answer 54

thanks, at least you're in the good zone, my score is at a C - XD

Answer 55

Oh, i got a d

Answer 56

@Ray_Masters there. i finished the cover. i managed to sneak it. lol

Answer 57

holy shoot! wow! that's...Awesome! XD it looks great

Answer 58

@Ray_Masters Thanks!!! Tell me whenever you need a design, logo or anything really and i will make it! Tell others about me plz :)