Question

Smoke blow out the window, call it summer haze
Starin' down the barrel bet that you seen better days
Tell me what more can I say, I can kill it all day
Speed dialed the coroner, got some bodies for ya
Blood on the carpet, death in the beat
And I keep it G always like I'm straight up off the street
Hustle like I need it, flow is ice cold
And I'd tell you that I killed it
But we already know
And I mean it when I say that's the way the story goes
Leave the King in the castle ... Deheaded flows

Answer 1

This is actually really good, so much better than what I could do. Nice job, I want to see more soon. :333

Answer 2

I got plenty. Gimme a sec.

Answer 3

Aint nothing in this world can try to affect mine
I write new lines, and try to do it better the next time
There aint no stress, when I’m rocking the vest
I just hope a homie on my block don’t put a glock to my chest
I got the ruggedest style that ya never even heard of
Come to my block, check the burners homies is stressed cuz the murder
I just keep it clean, I make my own scene
Cuz I’m only doing this rap thing to get more green
But the real passion, might sound old fashioned
Cuz where I’m from there aint no relaxin
Homies rolling dice, hearts colder than ice
The ones who paid the price is more than just nice
My lyrical concept type of questions got you guessing
How can I test the best, or make an impression
When I write rhymes, blueprints fill the lines
When I’m in the lab, all other thoughts clear my mind
And yo son, I’ve defeated the best over 100 times
Eh yo, why need a gun when I got my mind?

Answer 4

That was something I've been working on.

Answer 5

Lmao my friend wrote some of the first part.

Answer 6

That's, pardon my slang, FIREEEEE. xD The last line really hit me.

Answer 7

I've got a lot more. love to rap. I'll think of one about you. c;

Answer 8

It's like poetry, really. And aww, thanks! :3

Answer 9

Okay. I got one. I'm gonna do one section at a time though.

Answer 10

Theres this girl, Shes hijacked my mind
Shes like an angel and super model combined
Shes one of them girls thats impossible to find
And I thought to myself get too close and you'll end up getting declined.
Seein her made my heart beat too fast, her body was too defined
And her face just shined, I swear I wanted her to be mine.
The thought of her sent shivers down my spine
Doing something to harm her would be the worst crime.

Answer 11

ok

Answer 12

And I cant even start to describe how she made feel
The way I got the butterflies all the time was just unreal
The thought of her being mine was so ****ing ideal
She span my mind around like a water wheel
When I daze at her walking from a distance my jaw always dropped.
And when i knew she acknowledged my existance my heart always stopped.
She was so perfect, no disrespect, she always had me instantly erect
I couldnt never even find a defect. or maybe I should get my eyes rechecked
incorrect, she looks better than those fakes with special effects

Answer 13

Babe, honestly, you everything I ever wished for
Theres nothing about you that I dont adore
Please take my hand, and above everyone we'll soar
I swear I'll take you to a place you've never explored before
I look into your eyes, straight away you have me hypnotized
after seeing her, I didnt even need a zoot, she had me more ****ed than those illegal highs
Being in her presense was like my greatest prize,
I just wish I could get more closer.
But I'm scared shes something that I wont get over.

Answer 14

My aim is to find the key to her heart
Be able to unlock it and then give it a kick start
But I need to realize its gonna be way too hard
Theres a big chance of me getting terribly scarred
Im never gonna find a girl like her though
Why cant I force myselft to let go ?
Maybe I havent had enough of the love that she shows
For the things that she made me realize, my life i owe
and so, I want her to know, that she makes my tears glow
when im trying find my way
through the dark tunnel, where theres no light and no place to go
so I thank her deeply for the gift that she bestowed.

Answer 15

Enough of this **** having to be so complicated
And too much have I contemplated
getting sedated, doin my ting, months went by as I patiently waited
till she slowly stopped keeping me updated.
And it was unrated, the way that she vacated.
The horror of a broken heart that she recreated.
There was no way to have my feelings expressed.
I was way more than just depressed
I was distressed, dissapointed, and possibly possessed.
My heart wanted to go ona protest.
After that I understood lifes just a test,
and theres no rest, until you've fully completed your quest.
**** will start hitting you from north, east, south, west
And theres a limit on the amount of life vests
If your not carefull your mind and body will end up dispossesed.
Now you dont wanna be put to an eternal rest?

Answer 16

It took me 8 hours on that. I did that nonstop. That was literally Saturday. I stayed up all night writing that.

Answer 17

This is literally art.

Answer 18

It's a 4 minute song and took me 8 hours to write.

Answer 19

Not even a song yet.

Answer 20

Just a thought.

Answer 21

I'll be awaiting the day where I can see your work out on stands. You're going to go somewhere.

Answer 22

:O NOOOOOOOO I TOTALLY HAVE AN IDEA

Answer 23

Go on :3

Answer 24

I'm gonna think of another freestyle real quick.

Answer 25

1st hook.

Answer 26

Oops

Answer 27

xD

Answer 28

Look at my life, this is what I do
You was taking flights but you ain’t ever flew
I put it all on the line, I’m standing on the money
Life is my btch, you will never take her from me.

Answer 29

I've just been so depressed lately
so bummed out and no reason why
I know it's a given feeling and not an innately
All I wanna do is just sit and cry

Feel my tears slowly crawl down my face
I don't wanna do anything anymore not even smile
Inside I can't help but feel ashamed and disgrace
I know I'm sad, I'll skip the first step, theres no point in denial

I have nothing here for me, nothing to lose
man I'm so lost in my head i don't know what to do
happiness avoids me with hatered and vain, a manner quite ruse
Depressed emotions are coming over me in slews

I think I'm going to just quit and give up
I mean even If I try and hang on, I won't gain a thing
My life is a circle, that's repeatedly f***ed
I can't shake this feeling, no matter how hard I try it just clings.

I can't help but just sit and here and vibe man
Nah this isn't pro, and it's not about a dude named stan
But it's still a sad story of how life just goes by
We all have time limit, a time and place that we die

I can't shake that feeling that I'm here for nothing
I ain't good at anything, and I'm always in sh**
I always wake up in the night feeling that slight sting
So I think this is guys, I'm done, I quit..

Answer 30

I took half of that from one of my other raps

Answer 31

Tragic but beautiful. <33

Answer 32

Straight from my heart.

Answer 33

If you come up with more, just pm me.. I want to read more. c:

Answer 34

Uhm, well I will say this.
Rap is much better to read on paper than to hear, and even then I'm half traumatized.

Anyway's, don't mind me. Just a thought. :)

Answer 35

Nice.

Answer 36

Thank you for the feedback guys, this thread will never close. ;)

Answer 37

Man.. Why do people call me the King. Is it because I'm an angel with a gun and wings? All these rumors you and your friends like to spread, keep it on up and I'm gonna shoot you up dead. The rhymes that are lyrically sick, with every single word that I love to spit, I am just a natural at this sh**, come back later when you can actually take a hint.

Answer 38

I'm gonna rap about my Grand Father who served in the army.

Answer 39

you are a good rapper ray c:

Answer 40

To you grandpa, I thank you for serving our country, in your eyes you didn't do it for no money. You said you don't regret what you did, you always wanted to do it. Ever since you were a kid. I know your not here no more, and it stll makes me sore. I'm gonna go on to persue my dreams, as you did. You're the real king.

Answer 41

Random freestyle. Sorry.

Answer 42

That came from the heart man.

Answer 43

I started crying xD

Answer 44

its really damn good I love it

Answer 45

Thank you for the feedback.

Answer 46

Nice job!! :D

Answer 47

Oh my god :D

Answer 48

Thanks, Wendy. :D

Answer 49

Your welcome!! :D

Answer 50

Is that Danny? e.e

Answer 51

Who?

Answer 52

Those were amazing! I'm in shock that you created that :D

Answer 53

NetflixAndNo? e.e

Answer 54

That's my woman bfffel :D

Answer 55

Danny has so many accounts e.e

Answer 56

When I call you Perfection, you like to say "Objection". But I don't lie, or at least, not about this, you are what they call...Perfection. When I'm all alone, you would text my phone. You would say "What's up!" When I'm down in the dumps. You would say "Hey!" when I'm feeling away. You the only one, who can talk me out of doing stupid things, I still don't know what life is gonna bring. Hopefully something good, as I wish it would. But if it doesn't... I. Still. Got. You.

Answer 57

That's really good!!! :D

Answer 58

Great job!! :D

Answer 59

Most of these rappers today in the game, don't even know what they are saying. Round and round, heard it all before, but when I heard of you, it kinda made me sore. The love and hate, will never discriminate, how much I appreciate, the cards I was dealt. Even though a lot of the time I spend my life alone. But sooner or later, I'm gonna be known, for all these lyrics I'm spitting right now at home. Sooner or later, I'll be in the studio, away from the house, and in Hollywood. At least that's my dream, to one day wake up and all the sudden be King.

Answer 60

Pardon me, get out the way. You are in the way of my success, trying to stop me from being the best. That's not gonna happen, cause you're already hearing the best. Better get a vest because my words are like a bullet to the chest.

Answer 61

Hey, Eric :) Check this out: https://www.rappad.co/blueprints/94190

Answer 62

I didn't write the first one mate. ;) Stop instigating.

Answer 63

I was feeding off that rap.

Answer 64

Posted it so I would have an idea. c;

Answer 65

I also posted most of my raps on freestyle threads. So don't go accusing me of stuff. cx

Answer 66

Hey eric, check this out :) http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=157486497

Answer 67

I can't click on it lmao

Answer 68

Roblox? LMAO Really?

Answer 69

Oh, I get what your getting to.

Answer 70

1 sec.

Answer 71

Why you tryin', when you lyin'
You say can make a rap, but boi you ain't no batter then a lyrical drap

Answer 72

@raymonde20 dude you're proof that rap music isn't all rude and dirty like my dad says lol
I really like what you've put on here so far!!!