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Answer 1

Oh now can't you see what I've become I hope your happy now that its done
Behind these new smiles and laughter nobody knows I am holding a gun
Ready to explode or nah this anger is killing me within can't take it anymore. *sit*
Kinda funny how you have a relationship and your expected to commit
But when I commit I get shot in my heart and yeah it tears me apart
Thinking how can I mask these feelings who am i trying to impress
My mom betrayed me and my dad smokes weed they expect me to be the best
All these broken hearts first the girl that stole the weeknd dang my lifes a mess
Everyday I try to work things out nothing ever happens and im delay of progress
I build up religion and give my best to people to get turned around and treated like dirt
People may call me suicidal and depressed over this but in all reality im just hurt
I would never wanna die and i sit here and never even cry
But a world without truth is all one big lie
That's all im living in people think im okay but i wanna let it go
that was all fine and cool if i was in my life 10 years ago
But just because you are hurt doesnt mean your depressed
Instead of worrying bout my broken heart and what i dont have i know im blessed
i got people who care, a car, and an address
I have God who is above al I am never giving up for
and I am sorry to all the atheists out there calling you names and it wasnt fair
We share this world and our beliefs we all breathe the same air
forgive me today as i am as i will be and everything i do
As I lift you up with everything you go through
Don't feel pity for me, don't feel sorry for me as it is not what i want
I just want to continue to bless my self and fake a smile with nonchalant

Answer 2

Wow! Awesome! xD

Answer 3

Keep up the amazing work! :3

Answer 4

Almost made meh cri.
10/10 poem. c:

Answer 5

oh my... that was amazing.... really messed with my emotions.... :D keep it up!!! your amazing...

Answer 6

Ew

Answer 7

Wow ..i'm less speach<3

Answer 8

*reverse applause*

Answer 9

Very good