Question

I have a writing on how volcanoes affect people
and environments and I need help with the introductory/attention grabber. Please Help!!!!!

Answer 1

What you need is a hook/thesis statement. So first tell me what some of your points in the essay are gonna be so I can help you with the attention grabbing part.

Answer 2

I'm trying to explain the affects of volcanoes on the environment and people.

Answer 3

Okay. But could you tell me what are the affects that they have on people and the environment? Because if I know the affects I can help.

Answer 4

The ash from the eruption makes soil rich. They damage lots of homes and people lose their lives.

Answer 5

Okay so maybe you could write something like "Imagine sitting outside one day basking in the sun and then bam! a burning sensation happens on your right arm. Suddenly your whole body feels like it's on fire. Through the pain you are able to see tiny pieces of ash from a nearby volcano gently land on your forehead."
Lol I have no idea what I just wrote but something like that would work. Good Luck Love! <3

Answer 6

Thank you!

Answer 7

No problem Love! Good luck on that paper! :3