Question

if i posted a poem i wrote would anyone give me feed back?

Answer 1

yh

Answer 2

I always give feedback :) Feel free to post it.

Answer 3

okay thank you hold on

Answer 4

i am happy to give feedback

Answer 5

we live in this world, where everything is broken.
broken hearts, broken smiles,
broken homes, brooken dreams,
All of it is broken, yet we live in this world where everyone excpects you to be perfect.
It's sad, wrong and pathetic.
We shouldn't be living in this world were everything is perfect. because nothing i perfect.

please comment what you think.

Answer 6

also can I give more then one medal on a question?

Answer 7

sure

Answer 8

Alright, I'm going to be very through here with my feedback if you don't mind that. @afloridagirl

Give me a minute :)

Answer 9

no of course not lol

Answer 10

@afloridagirl
Alright, here you are. :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14QYzMsvLAuTit0CCuIXg6cxTD7ioe5_OsPxapMtGDLk/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 11

thank you so much, I believe I like your version better then mine lol.

Answer 12

I'm not sure how you tag and stuff I'm new to this

Answer 13

No problem! :) Glad to do it.
Yeah, its ok. Feel free to revise and just play with word's till you've provided a deep enough piece.

And as far as tagging goes, all you have to do on a post is hit the "@" symbol and then start typing the other person's username. :) It should come up. Kinda like Twitter.

Answer 14

okay thank you :)

Answer 15

No problem :)

Answer 16

i would give feedback too

Answer 17

i would love to hear what you think @JoannThomas