Question

I got bored and wrote a poem. :P
Feel free to give feedback. :P


~The Mask~

When I'm sad
I smile wide
To hide what I'm feeling inside.
Put on a mask
And say I'm up for the task
But on the inside, I'm dying
On the inside, I'm crying
Oh, why won't someone see
And help me
Why can't someone see past this mask of mine?
Because, I'm not fine.

Answer 1

As a fellow poetry writer I really really like the outline :3 I suggest the use of figurative language.... but I still like it the way it is.

Answer 2

Dude I love this..... I can relate to it

Answer 3

@mustbethestars thank you for the feedback, it's something to ponder about using if I write another poem. ^.^
@bigpapa1 I'm glad that you enjoyed it. ^-^

Answer 4

:)

Answer 5

good job @YoungStudier

Answer 6

Thank you @JoannThomas ^-^

Answer 7

@YoungStudier
Here you are :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NbC5nRHkc_yNCWTEalx0cNuIiWOGfZpoyq4A9sKaH9w/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 8

Thank you so much for the feedback @Atsie <33333333

Answer 9

You're very welcome :)

Answer 10

That is amazing, @YoungStudier!! :)
It's very simple to write yet has a point. :)

Answer 11

Thank you @jabez177 ^.^ I'm glad that you liked it. :)

Answer 12

This is amazing, @YoungStudier .
Good Job! :)

Answer 13

thats amazing @YoungStudier !!

Answer 14

Thank you @MrHirohito and @RAINBOWDASHROCKS ^.^

Answer 15

Em so yo made this Poem O.O
DAANG!!! That is really good<3

Answer 16

Thank yewwww @AloneS <33333

Answer 17

Good job

Answer 18

Thank you @JoannThomas ^.^

Answer 19

Noice job m8 I love it c:
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Answer 20

Tank chu @the_ocean_girl c:

Answer 21

I Like This Poem :)

Answer 22

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, @malijhaa ^.^

Answer 23

This...is....art!

Answer 24

miss you @YoungStudier

Answer 25

I'm right here. B)

Answer 26

.-. .-. .-.

Answer 27

Dem faces doh. (B

Answer 28

wow

Answer 29

great poem sadly i relate