MEDAL & FAN. I need help ASAP!
I need to turn the following sentence into a hook for a fantasy flash fiction story:
"As drugged as he was, the blonde haired adolesant heard what was going to happen to his dear family."

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4everaddicted2anime · Answer

@pooja195

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@ShadowLegendX

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@Elsa213

anonymous · Answer

Write about how the boys family was being taken away and the boy is trying to find them

4everaddicted2anime · Answer

The storyline is actually the opposite

anonymous · Answer

then write with the storyline

4everaddicted2anime · Answer

Is there a way to polish this sentence to make it better?

ffasinger · Answer

your sentence is actually really good dont change it