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OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

MEDAL & FAN. I need help ASAP! I need to turn the following sentence into a hook for a fantasy flash fiction story: "As drugged as he was, the blonde haired adolesant heard what was going to happen to his dear family."

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

@pooja195

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

@ShadowLegendX

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

@Elsa213

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Write about how the boys family was being taken away and the boy is trying to find them

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

The storyline is actually the opposite

OpenStudy (anonymous):

then write with the storyline

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

Is there a way to polish this sentence to make it better?

OpenStudy (ffasinger):

your sentence is actually really good dont change it

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