Question

All of Me - cover by tootzrll (originally by John Legend) tell me think and dont be afraid to critique! i accept all feedback :)

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1fdKAV6xFcr

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*tell me what you think

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@Atsie

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@sky_guy02

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@myah

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OMG still in love with your voice <33333
it sounds amazing tootz :3 you sing with lots of emotion
(u almost sound like ur really depressed lol

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LOL XD thanks sky! <333 @sky_guy02

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I like your voice :)
There's definitely a lot of room for improvement but I'm terrible at giving advice and explaining things so I'll leave it to @Atsie XD

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XD okay thanks anyway! @ayeedomo

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You're welcome! ^v^
Practice makes perfect XD

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there's like 20 people with that same icon am I missing out on a secret club or something?!?!? o_________________________o lol
@tootzrll @Atsie

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@tootzrll
ooookkkkay, I am going to write you an essay ok?
Alright, and so what this essay is going to be about is a Tootsie Roll's singing.
Okay, and now here is the essay.

You started off fairly shaky and I'm guessing maybe you were a bit nervous at first, but then you got stronger and that's definitely good! :)
Next thing that I want to note is your tuning with the music.
In your Little Things cover I specifically told you that you needed to allow you're vocals to flow properly with some actual music seeing as it was an aceppella.
Now that you have, it gives me a better idea of how you need to do things.
Everyone's voice is definitely different and tune's differently with various forms of music, and also not everyone has perfect vocals (excluding the fantabulous Adele).
But what I think is best for you to do at this point is grab a piano exercise, (there are TONS of them on YouTube) -I can find one for you if you'd like- and go up and down on a scale so that way you may 1) get comfortable with how you sound and also learn to tune better to a musical instrument (we don't want tone deaf-ness, no no sister!) and 2) this will also help you learn where you're range is.
The ranging of one's voice (talking of yours atm) leads me to my next point.
I noticed that you struggled with the "A-L-L-L" part.
This is the part where your "out of tune-ness" really showed up.
Don't feel bad.
We all struggle with that type of singing at some point in our lives.
Its tricky because not only is it in a bit of a different range then how we are naturally used to singing, but its a falsetto type of singing. It's where air goes through like the top of your "throat" (I'm not good at where things are in the body, so bear with me here) and it tends to give a higher airy but rather flavorful part to the song.
I think what is most important right now is that you work on acquainting yourself with music and learning where your range ends and where it begin's.
From there we could work on expanding it in different way's.
But there's something to bite on for now anyways. :)

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And @ayeedomo a lot of people have the same profile pic, because we are honoring @jigglypuff314 . Its her birthday today, and we all love her <3

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okay thanks so much atsie!!!! <33333 @Atsie

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No problem Tootz ^-^

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Ah ok :D
@Atsie

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You look smashing today Alyssa! :P

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XD

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good job

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wow gosh how great you might want to sing the high notes a little bit more of an action like you mean it like sing it like you really mean it if you know what I mean

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ya, okay. thanks! :) @daisyrainbowmist and thank uuu! @awesomepuppies

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no problem if you need help with music or anything I can help

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okay thanks again! :) @daisyrainbowmist

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FUDGING AMAZING....UR SO AMAZING TOOTZ ...i swear ur so incredible and this makes meh cry lmao but ur just sooo fudging amazing...i swear u sing wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better than me!!!!!!! ugh ur so good! O.O

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XDDD nuuuuuuuu ur WAAAAAAAYYYYY better, safa! dont say that!!! <333333

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ARE U DEAF OR BLIND..OR BOTH. ur fudging amazing...u know ur good lol -.- i love u and its true..u should be a singer <33333333

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<33333333 im good but ur better!!! srsly frfrfrfr ur better

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hahahaa no stop lol. this is ur song ur question stop making it about me lol ur truly amazing and have an amazing talent <3333333

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*-*
@tootzrll Tootsie Roll
Your voice *-*
Omg
Gorgeous *.*
My lovez it <3333333
You did wonderfully <3333333

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^-^ awww ILYSM SAFA!! <333333333333333333333333 but srsly u NEEEEEED to post your recording like SOON!

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<33333333333333333333333333 THANK UUUUUUUU YOUNG!!!! ILYYY!!!! @YoungStudier

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<333333333333333333333333333333333333333 Ily2 Tootsie Roll :3

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awe lmao....I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE U SOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHH TOOTZ..I THINK I'M GONNA DIE LMAO... AND I'M PUTTING ONE UP NOW MAYBE IDK..UR GONNA DIE FROM IT LOL

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<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 @Safa102 HURRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE YA <3333333333333333333333333333 AND OKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HOLD ON..CAN A GIRL PRACTICE LOL

Answer 36

yeah give the nice safa time to practice

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lol thanks daisy! <333 but i'm doing it now so just wait lol sorry

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Amazing <33333333

Answer 39

thanks, mimi!!! <33333333333 @batmano3

Answer 40

It is very nice! :) But a tip. Try to time when you breath in. I noticed you didn't take a breath and that's why you couldn't keep the tune when you had to go low. So yeah, that's what my teacher told me. :P

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thanks steven! but my body is really tiny, so u cant really hear me breathing. i am breathing, its just u cant hear me XD @jabez177

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I know. :P But you need to time when you breath to make sure mistakes like when you had to go to a lower tone then you sort of lost breath there.

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right. thanks! :) @jabez177

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@batmano3 here ya go