Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?

For vim and vigor, drink VitaSip! This amazing new sports drink will make you feel energetic, clear-headed, and ready to face the world. VitaSip is full of vitamins and minerals for optimum health. And, VitaSip tastes good. So sip your way to better health. Drink VitaSip—It’s sip-ly delicious!

A) citing expert opinion
B) using extraneous information
C) inserting a run-on sentence
D) introducing an additional slogan

Question

Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?

For vim and vigor, drink VitaSip! This amazing new sports drink will make you feel energetic, clear-headed, and ready to face the world. VitaSip is full of vitamins and minerals for optimum health. And, VitaSip tastes good. So sip your way to better health. Drink VitaSip—It’s sip-ly delicious! 

A) citing expert opinion 
B) using extraneous information 
C) inserting a run-on sentence 
D) introducing an additional slogan

daniee_bruhh · Answer

I think that all advertisements have to have an expert opinion since you need someone people trust like a doctor or celebrity to seal the deal.