Question

I need help!!

Answer 1

@Wendy.Ivette11714

Answer 2

So what do you wanna write about ?

Answer 3

yeah so i think do we have to compare the both given graphs

Answer 4

Correct

Answer 5

such as like the manufacturing is pretty much same in both graph

Answer 6

so basically we have to write the different between both graphs?

Answer 7

well I am looking for a good way to start can you little help me?

Answer 8

Sure

Answer 9

so what can i say in my intro paragraph

Answer 10

@KendrickLamar2014

Answer 11

just try to help me in starting then i will carry on

Answer 12

Yea let me think

Answer 13

@Marie1738 @anwaarullah @YoungStudier @DanJS

Answer 14

So, what do you need help with @MTALHAHASSAN2

Answer 15

take a look at it

Answer 16

i need help with intro paragraph

Answer 17

Well what do you see in the first graph and the second graph?

Answer 18

yea so I see is that in both graphs they are different number of employees in each options

Answer 19

Hmm.. that's not what I see. I see that in the 1st graph, Men are more employed in all the jobs than Women. In the 2nd graph, Women have over-passed Men in 2 of the 6 job position.

Answer 20

well yea

Answer 21

so do I also have to tell about in which the women are more then the men like if we look at the manufacturing options it's pretty same in both graphs

Answer 22

Yes, because it changed over time. Men were being way superior in the 1st graph. There was a change..

Answer 23

just try to help me with intro paragraph then I will carry on.........
Well how can I start a good intro paragraph?

Answer 24

Hmm let me think

Answer 25

ok

Answer 26

You need two things to do a thesis statement:
1. They should get the reader's interest so that he or she will want to read more.
2. They should let the reader know what the writing is going to be about.

Answer 27

how many thesis do i need thou

Answer 28

You only do one thesis statement which is one to two sentences.

Answer 29

can i used that sentence which you wrote before. Can I used that for my thesis statement?

Answer 30

i am talking about this one:
I see that in the 1st graph, Men are more employed in all the jobs than Women although in the 2nd graph, Women have over-passed Men in 2 of the 6 job position.

Answer 31

Those work :)

Answer 32

thanks

Answer 33

What do you need help in?

Answer 34

Your Welcome :)